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Surprising Twist
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Thursday, October 11, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A SURPRISING TWIST

By John Herlihy

                                                  

The senses betray a surprising twist in their role,

Taking up residence in another sense they stole.

The ear sees what the eyes cannot begin to see;

The sharp eye hears what the ear cannot foresee.

We see clearly with the eye a melody that we hear;

Rhythms take on new colors that draw ever near.

The echoes of the plucked violin ride high in the air;

They touch the heart as an emotion seemingly rare.

Exotic smells evoke sure richness that invade touch,

Memorable for their quality and treasured as such.

Taste the culinary delights of the world only to smell,

All the perfumes of Arabia drawn from a desert well.

Our glorious senses hold inner mysteries that save;

To see and hear the crashing of a thunderous wave.

 


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 Reviews of "Surprising Twist"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 30, 2018
INDEED ALL OF OUR SENSES COMPLIMENT, DEFINE AND ENHANCE EACH OTHER, WHITE AT THE SAME TIME, WORKING SO WELL... INDEPENDENTLY. REMINDS ME OF THE SCRIPTURES WHICH SAYS(AD-LIB)WE ARE ALL MEMBERS OF ONE BODY, WITH DIFFERENT FUNCTIONS, YET, WORKING TOGETHER. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION.

Reviewed on October 22, 2018
Hmmmm......a gentle twist to a poem! You are a word wizard, John!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 13, 2018
The paradox of the senses are a favorite subject for me as well. Here, you've penned a clear, poetic rendering of what lifts our unique brains into a realm of appreciation no other specie can attest to.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 12, 2018
As some of my senses remain keen and others are on the wane I can identify with your poem and even with those two, seemingly incongruent statements. For those with disabilities may have seen while deaf and heard while blind what others cannot in some mysterious ways that the brain collects all of our senses and interprets them.

I find it a contemplative write that rings true to me.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 12, 2018
I'm with Jerry on this one, unless those 2 lines were meant to be "twisted" like that.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 12, 2018
"The ear sees what the eyes cannot begin to see;
The sharp eye hears what the ear cannot foresee."


In my opinion these two lines are confusing to me. They seem to contradict each other.

The rest of your poem is excellent in its beauty of what you have delved into.


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