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Awareness Rising
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Tuesday, May 9, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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-- Awareness Rising --

By John Herlihy

 

Awareness rising,

From nothingness torn.

Consciousness abiding,

In this world I am born.

 

I will not awake,

Until I am awoken.

Do not me break,

Heal me when broken.

 

Remember me,

When I am forgotten.

Forget me,

Then withered, rotten.

 

If you lose me,

Will I be missed?

If you choose me,

I will be blessed.

 

Do not me forsake,

May I never be forsaken.

I am for you to take,

You are my eternal token.

 

If you touch me,

I will be caressed.

If you guide me,

I will be blessed.

 

If you hate me,

Then I will die.

If you love me,

On You I rely.

 

Speak to me,

And I will listen.

Sing to me,

My soul will glisten.

 

When suffering grief,

Lost in my misery.

Only in you, relief,

The lure of your mystery.

 

When I lay down,

In your absence, I weep.

Silence then my sound,

Your presence to greet.

 

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Copyright © John Herlihy

Saturday 8 April 2023


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 Reviews of "Awareness Rising"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 25, 2023
A FINE WORK, JOHN. THIS SPEAKS OF TOTAL SURRENDERING TO THE OBJECT OF ONE'S AFFECTION, WHOEVER OR WHATEVER THAT MIGHT BE. LIKE AN ADDICTION, THUS, ONE CAN ONLY PRAY THAT IT IS A POSITIVE 'PANT'. IN MY CASE...MY AWARENESS OF MY NEED FOR 'HIM' DID RISE LIKE THIS. AMEN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 11, 2023
I always respond with interest to poems that use the 1st person to not only express personal concerns, but use the 1st person in such a way that there is easy identity available for the reader's own personal self-evaluation of principles that mean something to all. Such is this poem.

Reviewed on May 9, 2023
You still have a lot of living and tons of writing to go, my friend! 'Sounds like you are "down". pm me.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 9, 2023
I find this one more personal and intriguing. I sense a longing for correction in a lot of ways. May everything the poem wishes for come true.

Ron


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