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Dark Night
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Thursday, March 19, 2026    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Dark Night

by John Herlihy

 

Tell us a story, the children begged,

A story about what, their grandpa asked,

A story about a dark night, they squealed,

Darkest night you ever seen, they implored?

 

A night that is peopled with stories

Takes away the loneliness we all have.

The wind may blow and the rain may fall,

A night peopled with stories will enthrall.

 

Their grandpa sat back in his rocking chair,

Then he slowly began to stroke his beard.

As if he were deep thinking, then he said:

“Let me see . . . oh yes. Now, I remember.”

 

“It was the darkest of all the dark nights

Of all the dark nights that I ever remember.

Filled with stories to take away the loneliness.”

The children listened without a peep, wide-eyed

 

“The rain fallin’ down heavy, light, then heavy,

Soundin’ like a roar at first, then only a whisper.

The wild wind whistled among the tree branches.”

The children listened spellbound to nature’s sounds.

 

“I was sittin’ at home lonesome, with no company.

When suddenly, I heard this knockin; on my door.

So I got myself up and went over to open the door.

Well, sir, who was it but this passel of rain drops.”

 

The children didn’t know about a passel, didn’t care.

It was the raindrops that they were focused on.

All bunched together and acting funny, human-like.

They looked at the old man, waiting for answers.

 

“Each of those raindrops lookin’ straight at me.

All of them lookin’ down at me scared and cold.

One of them in the front began to speak to me,

Speakin’ to me in this really strange, squeaky voice.”

 

“Mista, it’s so dark and cold outside here, in the dark,

And we are so very far, far away from our home.

Would you please mind tellin’ us which way the ground,

Where to find this second home to settle down into.”

 

The old man drew on his pipe and settled back in his chair.

“And that, my little raindrops, the darkest night I ever knowed.”

The children laughed and laughed, as only children know how,

Who thought talking raindrops the funniest thing they ever knowed.

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Copyright © John Herlihy

Sunday 30 December 2025


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 Reviews of "Dark Night"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 21, 2026
I JUST SIGHED OUT LOUD, MY FRIEND. A GRATIFYING WORK CONTAINING JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF FANTASY AND MYSTERY TO ENHANCE, HOLD AND REWARD OLD AND YOUNG IMAGINATIONS...ENDING WONDERFULLY. ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on March 26, 2026
I loved this…!
Captured so perfectly….atmosphere, expectation
and a child like enjoyment of the unusual, which is
perfectly normal and acceptable to their young imaginations…

Diana…🌿

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 22, 2026
You seem to have struck a new chord, one that captured one of the purest relationships--the storyteller and his followers--made all the more endearing by their youthful reactions. So well done!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 20, 2026
I was wondering where this was going as you described the grandfather so well. At least the grandfather of storytelling.

One thing about children, they are very accepting. The grandfather's story sounded to be something really profound or scary. Instead, it was raindrops asking directions. Now that I think of it, it is rather funny.

BTW, the vernacular was very good.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 19, 2026
A breath of fresh dark night air...ahhhh. Personificaiton is a wonderful tool to express what for many is the unexpressable. You managed to bring a life to raindrops that merged beautifully with the communication of the boys and the Grandfather. Loved this one, John. Write on!!!

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 19, 2026
How creative! I was right there with those children listening so aptly. My grandmother used to tell ghost stories. She was what the mountain folk referred to as a "wise woman" or in some cases a "witch woman." She "knew" things so we were never certain if her tales were true. Obviously I come by my storytelling naturally.

Rebecca

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 19, 2026
As entertaining a story-poem as I've ever read. I'll share this with Michele. Raindrops carry a wealth of symbolic and spiritual significance. A fresh start, a new beginning, healing and catharsis, divine favor and grace, life's cycles and rhythms, emotional cleansing and release. But your take here brings another facet to one of natures most blessed gifts. Well done John. Thank you for sharing. rlc


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