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Of Mice...And Women
by Vivian L Dawson → (All Poetry by Vivian L Dawson)
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Cutely portrayed bathing in your Martini...but,
have you ever been pursued by a mouse?

Because we lived near an open field, rodent control was
out of the question...so, we had been seeing signs of just
such a pest in our home of California sun and fun.

One October school day, my daughter had much homework
to do...sitting all comfy on the sofa by the fireplace...when
out  of nowhere..he popped in..sitting in the middle of the floor...a staring  contest to begin...but, my daughter had
other plans, to escape...on  top of the sofa...she did go,
amid screams that could be heard in our parking lot...the
mouse to budge not an inch.

Thinking the worse..as I entered the door, there he was..
and being the head of the household, I screamed even
louder, and joined her...amid the top of my chair.


He must have been hard of hearing, because he tantalized
us..until he had his fill..and just departed..Well, being of
sound mind, I decided he would not get the best of me...
that was after he ate our Halloween candy on the TV, and gnawing the furniture..with a vengeance, as in teething, with
his teeth ever growing.

Weeks went by feeding him peanut butter, cheese..and
various assortments suggested by our friends..to no avail...
Oh No...he was smarter than that..still continuing to pop
right in, and double daring us, to approach him unarmed.

Well, he was eating us out of house and home..and with
his culinary delights we were serving, leaving evidences of
just where he had been..is there no pride?

But, of course he was getting fat..which in the end was
his demise, getting away from the trap..he became too slow.

But, you know, we missed him after it was all over..at his
wake..a tear or two, for quite an adventure..never repeated.

(c)copyright10November2010vivianldawson


 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Of Mice...And Women"
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 24, 2011
Poor little guy. We had a tiny Christmas Mouse visitor awhile back, and for several weeks we had Mad Mouse Mayhem, as both my cats and my dogs would chase him everywhere inside the house, knocking over everything in their way, in hot pursuit. They never caught him though, and now he lives in my garage!

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2011
LOVE THIS ONE VIVIAN, I HAD A SIMILAR EXPERIENCE. NO ONE WAS HOME BUT ME 7 YEARS OF AGE...A FUNNY LITTLE FELLA...BUT I CERTAINLY WAS THRILLED WHEN HE LEFT. THANKS FOR ANOTHER WONDERFUL PIECE OF WORK. ANNA

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
Wow, we got a mouse in the house once a few years ago and all my pets went crazy. Wasn't sure who to run after first. What an interesting piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
ohh, this is so lol..sss..and wonderfully written, and such a cute mouse and what feats ! Wow, loved it, enjoyed it..Vivian.neerja :)

Reviewed by Ron Michael (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
A very cute poem and well written too. Although it sounded more like South Memphis than California.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
Great poem and story...love it!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
An adorable poem and yes, this resonates!
I was stared down by a King mouse in my basement apartment in Back Bay Boston, on Newbury Street. He had the biggest ears, the most determined stare, and was not the least bit afraid of me! I stopped screaming after a few minutes and had a long conversation with him about how it was MY apartment and HE had to go, not me.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
A wonderful write indeed Laura

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
Delightful potrayal of womens reactions to a mouse! Good play on the words. Laughed and enjoyed it! Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2011
Funny. You told the tale mesmerizingly vivid and I know without a doubt it was true. I doubt I'd have shed those tears, however.


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