The center of the eye seems utterly dark.
The outer part colored but understands not.
The shell is a place that holds pressures so high.
We see with two focused.
Why are we so blind.
Its the heart that pumps love to the eyes we have made.
The world is our play ground.Perceived it as you may.
Stop for a moment.
Smell the roses of life.
Three hands come together.
Not of skin.
But of light.
It is a very esoteric, and at the same time, very clear message. "Roses Unite" is delivering a very profound message.
"Roses Unite" reads very easy and it strikes one's head right in to prod thoughts and consciousnesss.
NOTE:
This poem is too precious to be left as it is... It needs special care... So I ask the Author's permission to suggest a revision for this poem. It is a must!... Please!
Let your children enjoy the wonders and adventures of pets that join a family, bringing joy and heartwarming moments to their everyday lives. This story is about Tubby and Riley, two dogs who needed a good, loving home.
"Roses Unite" reads very easy and it strikes one's head right in to prod thoughts and consciousnesss.
NOTE:
This poem is too precious to be left as it is... It needs special care... So I ask the Author's permission to suggest a revision for this poem. It is a must!... Please!
Respectfully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU