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Can You Hear Me Now?
by Caryn M. Day-Suarez → (All Poetry by Caryn M. Day-Suarez)
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I've been trying to make a phone call for 5 years....so far the message hasn't seemed to get through....


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i pick up the phone
i put it down

i pick up the phone
dial tone

deep breath
i press the button down

i call you everyday
my mind screams your name
10,000 times
10,000 rings

no answer

someone told me telepathy works
if you concentrate
& try really,
really hard

i'm trying really,
really hard
to call you

please pick up...



Caryn Suarez

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 Reviews of "Can You Hear Me Now?"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 2, 2008
I am not using the phone but trying to connect to someone and it is just not happening. Oh well, we cannot have it all for ourselves but we won't give up either.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on June 12, 2004
Love to our Jeff's. hee hee

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on February 6, 2004
Sis Caryn, you have SO much talent to be so proud of, and you haven't event hit 50 yet like I will this year! Congrats to all you have accomplished, and blessings to even more greatness thru your humility that shows in the lessons of your writing heart. This poem I can relate to also, thank you for reminding me never to give up, especially when you know, and that other person knows, that your foundation is genuine.

blessins'
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2004
..have you tried NOT calling?..try it ..works wonders! *smile*
unique write..ty Caryn

vesna :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
I love this because I can relate to it. I have tried telepathy and I have not given up on it. Thank you for this offering, Caryn. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed on January 21, 2004
sometimes that one call is the hardest to make! very good write, caryn; enjoyed~

reminds me of our boss, the title of this poem..he says that a lot~ LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
There is so much more here beneath your words. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
This is excellent. I have done this also excellent expression.


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