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Down and Out
by Ruan Mills → (All Poetry by Ruan Mills)
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Trying on his shoes...


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How long, I’ve roamed this lonely world

In search of where I might belong

Pain and hurt have weighed me down

So long, that I’m no longer strong

 

I’m tired of putting on a face

To suit a world that doesn’t please           

No more can I inflict my bones

Upon such dreary days as these

 

My strident strut, a shuffle now

My spirit in a foetus, curled

I’m looking forward to the day

When I’m no longer of this world

 

Where once I stood, a void exists

Where once I sang, a wind now blows

My vibrant colours faded fast

My grave, far off, where no-one goes

 

No-one will want their pound of flesh

Nor beg my mausoleum key

In fact, no-one will come at all

Then surely peace will come to me.                 

 


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 Reviews of "Down and Out"
Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on December 18, 2013
Peace exists mostly in each persons mind...

Yes, often hard to see and find

-----especially in some enviroments

That why a good safe change of view is oft so helpful....

Another great one....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 10, 2013
A soul-reaching write expressing a universal and timeless theme of this life/world. Thank you, Ruan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 30, 2013
excellent
budd

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 29, 2013
There's both sadness and a sense of oneness with the life/death cycle in this poem, leaving the discovery choice to the reader. Well done.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 27, 2013
You have taken up a quiet voice, owning the ragged clothes, the feeling of disconnect. I have spent time on the street. Some chose it over the madness of living normally, some have been discarded, as much as a bag of trash, too many are financially wounded with no safety net to catch them when they fall. It is a whole different dimension when your day consists of finding something to eat and a safe place to sleep. And the last line says it all! M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 27, 2013
I would call it, “A Homeless Prayer.”

There is a deep sadness in your words. If only we could reach down and pull up by the boot strings all of those who have fallen by the wayside. In a way, Jerry is right. “Most of the homeless are there because they want to be.” But if we look deeper, we will find that the reason they have left life the way it is is because they have some deep down trouble that they can't shake and the real competitive world we call, home.

It's a difficult task, but I hope by the end of this century, we will have solved the problem of homelessness, loneliness, and despair.

Ron

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on September 27, 2013
I've just come back to AD for a bit.
This is a powerful reminder of your huge talent, amazing depth of feeling- expressions that squeeze the life out of at least me.
The world can be too much with us poets, or for us poets- but you shine very bright.
John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 27, 2013
Hate to read this, Ruan. I understand. I have been there. You are wrong about nobody wanting you. Someone does, just don't give up. You sound like you have already given up, but you haven't, i.e., the poem itself. You'll turn the corner someday and there he will be. It happens like that.


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