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Ocean Waltz
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Thursday, July 8, 2021    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Vision Of The Ocean


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It begins with the first breeze of morning across the sea shore
phonographic moments from early rising seagulls, arriving
at the edge of dawn, soaring into the blueness above
Initiating the steps to a beautiful day break the shore awakens,
with a harmony of sounds, orchestrated to perfection by nature;
Footsteps in the sand
salted lips and hands
wet feet digging deep
while others are still asleep
Front view seat on the cool cool spot, there she sits and waits for him
a wild chestnut horse with pony box hooves, running swift as the wind
She named him Red Beauty for the flecks of his eyes are rubies of light
in the slow rising sun.
He trots nigh away
but here she will stay
til' the sun burns inside
all the tears she has cried

It all starts with a dream, at the edge of the shore
with a girl and a horse racing right through the door
all the while the wind chimes, as the sea shells incline
at the end of the day she goes home, just in time.

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 Reviews of "Ocean Waltz"
Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on July 29, 2021
I can hear the pounding hooves in the sand. Beautiful words.

Reviewed on July 9, 2021
What a lovely, mystical poem.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 9, 2021
Another gem. There is nothing more enthralling than the ocean and its seaside.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 9, 2021
The structure of this is unique. (IMO) the two breaks in rhythm are effective, almost as if the writer is catching her breath in the midst a very personal reverie. Really nice Vienna. Enjoyed. rlc

Reviewed by Corrine Ardoin
Reviewed on July 8, 2021
Your poem took my breath away. I knew it was a special one with the first words, "It begins with the first breeze.." I can feel the sand, taste the salt, hear the ocean, and I can feel those emotions. How perfect the words you have chosen! Wonderful poem.


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