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Cupid Goes To Hawaii
by Mystic Rose → (All Poetry by Mystic Rose)
Thursday, February 3, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A humorous Valentine poem


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Cupid the sweet saintling of Love Village decided to go visit Hawaii
Always dressed in a dapper diaper he looked love struck and dashing
with frosty gold hair combed just so and silver tip wings oh so fancy
he pours love into hearts quicker than a penny in a bucket goes, ping !

When he landed on land he saw pineapples and Hawaiian luaus too
rounded hips slow swaying and voices greeting him like an old friend
They draped leis on his shoulders then said "welcome to Honolulu"
where dreams come true for everyone, yes we got the magic blend;

So they put him on a pedestal for he was after all messenger of love
he surfed in Lanai, Pineapple Island of sweet , oh you should see Him
shooting arrows as he walked on water, fitting them all like a glove
Lei skirts ruffled and feet shuffled, as the stars shone beneath a rim

They danced and they danced far into the night for love was finally here
Cupid did it once again in his dapper diaper and gold tipped spear.

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 Reviews of "Cupid Goes To Hawaii"
Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on February 5, 2022
Wild imagination and unique imagery, Mystic. I like the skirts ruffling and the feet shuffling. Fun* ~~ (the other) Diana

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on February 4, 2022
Wow Vienna…how imaginative and quirky!
This created such wonderful imagery…,
and so colourful too…
I agree with Richard…this would make a
great short animated movie…!
An unforgettable character!
I hope we meet him again…

Diana..🍃

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 4, 2022
Whimsical and musical combined to make all us romantics smile. Well done Rose.
Fee

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 4, 2022
I've never done it in diapers, but hey...
Done it with Beaujolais! Happy Valentine's Day, MR!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 3, 2022
A really nice blending of two fantasies. Aloha to you for your creativity. made everyone's Valentine eventually end up in Hawaii. My brother and his bride went there on his honeymoon. Unfortunately, after two children, they divorced.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 3, 2022
You've given that cute arrow shooting amoretto a new twist. Would certainly make a good, animated movie short. Very visual. You've aroused some fun phraseology too: "sweet saintling" "dapper diaper" and the "gold tipped spear" instead of the customary arrows was charming. Thanks 4 sharing. Peace.... r


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