Cosmic osmosis causes psychedelic thought (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Cosmic osmosis causes psychedelic thought
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Now where this one came from I know not...

Cosmic osmosis causes psychedelic thought… Now what the f**k do I mean herein? Writing this is just a matter of mortal sin, Is my mind finally experiencing something from drinking gin? Or is this the flashback I have been warned of, I feel I am in a spin… Spinning on down through the knowledge of dispersion, Barely touching the sides, able to see only diffusion, Opening the subject am I to the ultimate dissemination, Airing out our dirty laundry in front of the nation… Passing out from such intellectual thought, My mind and body must have at one time fought, Never did either the other caught, Sometimes I do fortunately feel so under-wrought… Shaped and molded by osmosis, Maybe my mind does suffer from osteoporosis, Fortunately for the rest there is a cure for tuberculosis, To you all I offer though you may therein refuse, a kiss, If not then I suggest you all just go and take yourselves a piss… © ed ~ 8/18/05

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

"Maybe my mind does suffer from osteoporosis,"

There it is, EM, the stuff that regularly sets you apart, names your gifts for writing... sheer, amazing "go where no one else goes" talent.

You often blow me down with your ability to stick it out there and grin attitude, but this is among the best! Stop questioning yourself... it works! (ok, ok, it's healthy and good to question ourselves... sigh). You have no problem with this one, though. It's a keeper! katy xox

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

"Okay what are you taking now?" I say while giving you a quick kiss.

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2005

What fun - loved the way you worked out your rhyming. Thanks for sharing!
Monette

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

I'm off to the bathroom..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

"To you all I offer though you may therein refuse, a kiss,
If not then I suggest you all just go and take yourselves a piss"

I rather take a pissed off kiss than none...so here goes....Mwhuuuuwa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess

feels like a touch of the sixties to me...take an aspirin and see me in the morning

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Couldn't have said it better my own little self...maybe it's the osteoporis in my mind that has caused all the little fractures -- Duke

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

To you all I offer though you may therein refuse, a kiss
If not then I suggest you all just go and take yourselves a piss…

Quite a conclusion, my friend, and my two mutts accept your big slobbery kiss offering, although I think I'll pass!

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

I completely agree with your premise. I laughed outloud reading some lines. Very deep thought thinking, stimulating and provoking. I will never think of osmosis the same way. I think I do have a calcified granuloma in my brain, too much osmosis.
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by john zimmerman

ed, i understand perfectly

you have passed through [[[[The Barrier]]]]

moreover you have returned
clothed and in your right mind ...

lead on o great avatar of cosmidelic ruminations!!!

Good Write

john+