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Who Forgives God...?
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As humans forgiveness we do require,

In life, enlightenment & peace we do aspire,

Who then does forgive He who is higher…?

 

Did God have a father & mother, not just a son,

He did for us supposedly create the planets & sun,

Was everything already in place before he had begun…?

 

Humanity has its drawbacks,

Many things we all do lack,

While God may not in anyway slack,

Who does forgive HIM creating man in his image?

For this he does not deserve to receive a plaque…

          © ed ~ 10/1/05

 

 


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 Reviews of "Who Forgives God...?"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 3, 2005
Here's my take..
God in omnipotent, he needs no forgiveness, as our supreme ruler, he is the father of all love.

He shows us how to forgive, he gave us his Son, so we may understand him and his purpose.
Much thought went into your write, many do ask these questions, it is human nature and perfectly normal.
Hope you find your answers one day my friend, peace be with you
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed on October 1, 2005
Too much thinking gives me a headache and a toothache once again. - A thought provoking write, Ed!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
good one!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
I would've like to been created in a
Rufuz image.
Great questions Ed.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
An interesting, poetic question.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
Nice.....well done!!

Thanks for the looooooong overdew visit!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
well said, i say with a smile.

maybe HE looks to us for forgiveness.
TX


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