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Critiqued by the Worst
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Thanks Karla for your most recent as well as Kate C for her review making this poem possible...


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Write do we in times of bad,

Write as well when we are sad,

Write at times when we are mad,

And of course there are those times we are glad…

 

Reviewed in a newspaper column,

They try to be as possible solemn,

We write alone while downhill we slalom,

Life for the most part an UPHILL battle…

 

Critiqued we are by the worst,

This is no good, paper overflowing in the trash,

Constantly in the mirror we to ourselves cursed,

Nothing we write has if any flash,

For most of us, jumped into poetry headfirst.

Our worst critique ourselves,

Been there we have had since the first…

© ed ~ 2/24/06
 

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Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Ed,

Glad I could be inspiration, although I hate being my own worst enemy. Keep writing, not for anyone else, like I've been trying to do, but for yourself. People are reading, I am, so there. :) And Rufuz is a great Muse, as is Dreamer.

(((HUGS))) adn love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Honest and straight from the heart!!

Well done Ed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Just keep writing Ed..
Rufuz will be mad if you don't..
I've never claimed to be a writer
I just like friends and love to laugh...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
I resemble that for the most part although it is not my fault because everybody really does not like me and that is why I snivel and moan about how bad my life is and expect everyone to stop/drop/quit what they are doing to spend TIME with me because I am so misunderstood and people don't like me. Oh, I said that already. On a serious note, websites like AD are for people who want praise for their work, it is not a critiquing kind of a place, not real critique. Your poem is certainly correct that we are our own worse critiquer, that is if we are truthful with ourselves, but at the same time, when we write something good there is nothing wrong with grinning and accepting (to ourselves) that is IS good.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 25, 2006
Poetic truth.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Ed, we write for the fact that we have to...and true, we are often our own worst enemy...I can say...I have always enjoyed your unique style.

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
writing is a lonely business, but it sure helps havin' friends like y'all! :)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Good write, Ed! A through Z has such meaning. Critiquing ourselves is done on a reward system instead of a negative putdown. It totally imobilizes the writer and defeats the purpose. A reward system in place with each piece of material accepted as a gift, the writer rewards themselves with presenting it. If it's not to the writer's liking, then it should not be presented until the writer accepts it themselves. Quality needs to come first, not quantity. Writers don't have to post something everyday if the flow is not meeting their personal expectations. Quality suffers if quantity rules. Moreover, it reduces a writer's opportunities to showcase their work.
I saw nothing wrong with the review you just gave me. You wished you could eat her Leo!

Sage

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Its not easy being a writer is it? Even harder being a true friend. Wonderful that you care :-)


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