ZENTYME...Revisited (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

ZENTYME...Revisited
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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I don't own this boat or any, but I enjoy the thought of just sitting on board and meditating...

At the end of the day, After all are done with play, When the sun has barely set, On a boat I would my stresses let go you can bet… Sitting in the cockpit, relaxing to tunes, Watching the night sky, cruising the lagoons, In sight of a few coastal dunes, Listening to a pair of apparently lost loons… The water lapping at the hull, Sounds of the gulls retiring for the night, The water cooler than the air, A light jacket at this time rare… Sipping a cup of green tea, Enjoying life’s aloneness, No other noisy boats to with compete, A lighthouse in the distance & a fog horns moan, Absolutely NO desire to watch the TV, Only calmness & serenity pervade my thoughts, But why in the middle of meditation do I have to always go pee…? © ed/\/\ 4/23/09

Reviewed by Darkest Angel

Reviewed on March 26, 2017

THAT ... IS PURE EVIL!

This is an excellent writing with so much laid back richness and a damned punchline from the bladder of hell - OMG! why did you have to do that! OH TEA! Shisk, I almost forgot about that ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 23, 2009

Wish I were there with you buddy for the peacefulness shines through and I would sure love that trip...

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

lol the last line,as it fits me to a t;-) Wonderful imagery in this poem Ed! Hope one day you get that boat!I'd love one myself!;-)..ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Nothing beat the sea's lullaby as it rocks you back and fort like a mother do to her baby so he can sleep.
I am with you there, lil'brother.

Georg

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

What a gem: ha-ha-ha

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Hi Ed, it's called cleansing. When you're meditating, you're actually cleansing body and soul. Go with it... you'll feel better...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

When u need to go you need to go..LOL...Hugsss

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

HAHAHA.... I was just really getting into that excellent write, so descriptive, full of emotion, a rare gem, and You gotta go PEE???

Puleeeese :):) Oh thanks for the larrfs, you hauled me in on this one mate
Chezza

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

not a bad way to relax!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Sounds wonderful Bro - except, replace that cup of tea with a bottle of good beer - then, after you drink the beer - just pee into the empty beer bottle - saves lots of time while meditating. And hurry up and get that boat so you, me, and Edvard can cruise on down to the Keys.