A new word in my vocabulary,
But being my brain is quite airy,
I most likely will forget its meaning,
So here I do write it out to remember the way I am now leaning…
The end of the world, of heaven & hell,
Death & judgment, part & parcel of theology,
No I am not writing here of mythology,
Nor do I write to anyone at this time an apology,
Instead I write basically to & for myself,
To recall in the future a memory of how I should this word to spell…
So bear with me if you so kindly will,
I write of this to remember its enchantment,
A word that has of me enchanted, some do that, ya know,
I write of this word with little skill,
Though to write of it does give unto me a thrill,
I cannot tell you of more without my voice getting too shrill…
© ed ~ 4/19/10
I love rhythmic poetry only. You show deep insight, that tells of
yourself and what others should take from it. Suggestion==
2nd verse 6th line, separate sentence at memory making a 7th line starting with how. Drop the of off making easier reading. Also a book called Capricorn rhyming dictionary, by Bessie Redfield helps me with
Rhyming speed bumps. Keep it up partner Darryl Ehlers
Patrick
HERE'S ANOTHER HELPER -
IT FALLS BETWEEN - ESCHAR ... A DRY SCAB ...
AND - ESCHEAT - A PROPERTY REVERSAL ...
TK.
EDvard(k) Ole Brother
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Hugs,
Sandie Angel :o)
Newfie hugs, Rose