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Submission...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Another middle of the night write...


Poem Artwork

The past our future

The future the present

The present doesn’t exist

Humanity does still persist…

 

Persistence the key

Resistance to pee

Not good you see

This comes to you from me…

 

From this does it come

Only I suppose to some

Heredity from our mum

Or seen only after imbibing rum…

 

Is rum then the culprit

From deep inside we do of this spit

We must have some ability in wit

From us to the rest of the world

This we must to, no matter the consequence, submit…


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 Reviews of "Submission..."
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
WUSS ...

WAIT'LL PEEWEE TELLS MA ED YEW BIN DOIN' RUM ... EWE 'RUM-DUM'!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
Confusion reareth its ugly head. Are we submitting to the pee within, or the rum without?

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
Yes ... rum is indeed the culprit. Try 18 yr old scotch. peace to you ... r

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
Submitting to rum. A likely story my friend. Now go have a blast on me.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
... when you gotta go, you gotta go, Ed. I don't do trampolining any more... it's when you go when you don't want to that you have to start worrying: and giving up sport! :)) Pass the bottle... no, the rum bottle, not the sample bottle, silly... !! LOL xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 11, 2011
Heredity from our mum
Or seen only after imbibing rum…

And dear old Ma thought I stole her bottle of rum; wait 'til she reads this...



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