Darkness Prevails... (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 31, 2011

Too much sugar in the blood.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 30, 2011

Quite an End of Days tone here, Brother. Perhaps you're having Prophetic Dreams.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 30, 2011

Deep indeed. Well done, Ed.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Depth in Your psyche' ~Ed~
penned this...a dream in which
light cast shawdows
in your dsrkness for awareness!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

ED ... WELL DONE, 'SIR WIPER' !

'... to sleep - perchance to dream ...'

OOPS! to 'nightmare' maybe?

awakening may be rude - but better than being lewd!

tk... P.S. fact that yew posted 8/29 tells me u Survived OK -
was thinkin' 'bout U - spent weekend in Hatfield PA - niece Connie's new house,
w/niece Bernie - U met both ...

more later ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Deep, intense but still the ending says so much of the entire dream...we can awake and sigh that it has left us unscarred...only a bad dream.
fee

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Very nice Ed. I'm wondering if the poem inspired the photo or if the photo inspired the poem. They sure go well together.

PS: Glad you're still with us and still have power. Dick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Outstanding writing, Ed.
Peace
Tony
P.S. Now you can surf.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Wow such profound words, understanding them thouh, think this is one of your best yet. I like the dead are alive cause we all never die, we are always alive in the spirit and with our savior and and i just don't know what i'm saying cause this has me profoundly awesomely thrilled to just be reading it. Thanks.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Wow! Nicely done, Ed!

Anna

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Well done, Ed, very well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Excellent, Ed. To try and explain the unexplainable has been the curse of poets forever. Good to see that you have joined that not so noble club. Really liked your wordplay.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Ed, this has a double meaning for me. Second, it reveals that society has accepted the dark as light. First, it speaks of my own darkness that I struggle with and sigh... thank you for sharing this dream...

In Spirit,
Bear