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My mind it does spin...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Sorry folks but this just sort of flowed out after awaking from a rather chaotic dream...maybe YOU can decipher it...?


Poem Artwork

 

So many styles,

So many with wiles,

Not so much to deceive,

Just for something from someone to receive…

 

Hell I have my little ways,

To attract attention on certain days,

But my mind it does spin,

With the many ways man commits sin…

 

What do I herein seem to mean,

Am I making sense, is this a clear scene,

Most times of my life I little do preen,

If it were up to me, all minds would be wiped clean…

 


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 Reviews of "My mind it does spin..."
Reviewed on February 1, 2012
hmm..I sense in WRITING!

This is quite receptive Ed!
Happy Dreaming, Writing and Living! My friend
Hugs! SHEE

Reviewed on January 30, 2012
JOISEY .... AS YER BRO PEEWEE HAS OFT' SAID ....

YEW LITTLE DO PREEN .... YER BODY ENUF ...

SO, IF'N ANYTHING SHOULD BE WIPED CLEAN ...

IT'S YER UGLY 'FRAME' ... 'TWOULD SEEM ...


Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Sounds like a confusing dream, Ed! But then quite often dreams don't really make much sense....

Anna

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 30, 2012
Bipolar? NAH! ;-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 29, 2012
You are just hyperactive.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 29, 2012
Dream on, unspin, awaken to clear vision...I have gone back to sleep this morning and felt that same feeling, now after sleeping another hour, somehow the spinning has gone away...Must be something going on in the Universe today...I will check it out, I seem to recall something to do with Mercury the planet of communication and electronics...

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 29, 2012
a world of zombies, now that's some dream ....

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 29, 2012
I guess there were times when we all wanted to wipe that slate clean Ed,Great write.

Rose

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
What? And give up your 37,672 reviews? Hah! Patrick

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
ahh... the temptation of the 'tabula rasa'... but where would we be without memory? Who could we truly 'see'? This sounds to me... rather like an eerie... nightmarish liberty... this wiping clean... no more than a bad dream... hope you awake in better spirits from this hellish review!

Be well and at peace with all.

Roger

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
I do agree that there are times when it would be great to "wipe the mind clean" and start anew. Thank you, Ed. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
You had me going until the last stanza, and after reading that I suggest going back to sleep and finishing the dream. Yep, liked the hell out of the first two, but couldn't decipher the last one.


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