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Fallen into a drunken abyss…
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
Wednesday, January 7, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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---Oblivion not easily attainable---


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Garrulous in talking to myself I became,
Fearful to a small degree of becoming insane,
The floor I stood on ceasing to be horizontal,
Canted it seemed like the deck of a ship,
The walls became curved,
The ceilings did swell…

Humiliated I became by the rambling nature of talking to the self,
In every whiny lament I saw a self-pitying wretch,
Self-pity was for me my social standing,
This child did not have the balls or maturity to accept my dark past,
I was plummeting into an abyss,
Towards a death I so richly deserved…

Obnoxious & sarcastic my drunken bouts did become,
My drink of choice, Jamaican rum,
Painful reminders of a dark past even with dad & mum,
Drugs & alcohol the only place I found to I could run…
© -me- 1/7/15

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 9, 2015
I no longer drink hard stuff. I like my beer and wine (if with a girlfriend who likes it). I am sure many can relate. Stick with maryjane, Ed. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 8, 2015
Coming to grips with the problem quite nicely. Someone played a cruel trick on a sleeping puppy. But at least, it's good for a laugh and the puppy wasn't harmed.

But you have been well-liked by your many minions, regardless of your condition in the past. There is much clarity in your words these days.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 8, 2015
Ed,
The photo is priceless, your poem, engaging!
Peace, love and light
Amber

Reviewed on January 8, 2015
Perhaps munching on some Milk Bone treats would help you out! I can't drink rum. After one drink, I'm off to la la land.

Love ya!

Jane


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 8, 2015
No drinking for you:

PS: If you have any old bottles of bourbon lying around, send them my way - for strictly medicinal purposes, of course. Thanks.

Reviewed on January 8, 2015
I love Rum but not too excess anymore, entertaining write Ed nice pic!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Yea I like the dog photo. I love RUM but drinking too much is like taking a 2x4 and beating myself over the head. However when my buddies and I have our annual college reunions we act like teenagers once again and get semi-plastered. God Bless us all. Amen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Been there. Done that. Sipping on a little cheap California burgundy as we speak.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Love the dog...

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed on January 7, 2015
ED ... GREAT PIC !!!

EWE OLE DOG YEW !

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Many have had that experience and recovered from it also. God bless you.


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