as is well known, the whipped cream on top, although costs more, is easier of getting than the brown bread dough beneath. Once we get confused to distinguish the flowers from fruits, all the mess emerges in no time. Regrettably, it has already happened long ago. Cheers, alex
To express this dysfunctional world in any less degree of absurdity would do a disservice to the sane of us needing some comic relief. Metaphors abound in stanza after stanza, each developing to the last one that says it all. Imagination at its best.
This is worth the read just for the originality of the metaphors. But you have laced them together into a coherent whole while showing us the absurdity of life through a prism that no one has ever heard of, much less looked through. It caught me off guard in that I expected curdled whip cream to be the ending to a short love affair. How mundane is that? You are one-of-a-kind with omnidirectional talent.
I'm sorry, but I didn't get this one. However it did remind me of Simon & Garfunkel's At The Zoo. None the less, it was an interesting write full of imagery.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
While I'm sure I missed a number of references in these highly clever and creative lines. I think I understand the angst expressed.
Ron