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Curdled Whipped Cream
by Danae Wilkin → (All Poetry by Danae Wilkin)
Saturday, January 7, 2017    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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The absurdity of the modern era


Poem Artwork

Jagged mobiles
With parabolic downward curves
Of branching satellites,
Like a couple’s lifespan that peaks and falls,

Or the belittling of alcoholics
Afraid of peach cobbler
Or the annoying abundance of writers
Who employ writers as their protagonists.

The giraffes who do laundry
Are as those who expect politicians
To fulfill their campaign promises.

Does the escapist 8 ball make you hungry
For a platter of gouda cheese, mustard and lederhosen?
Or the treacle of lies?

Life is the Buick of Cadillacs,
A salty dough topographic relief of mini-storage units
With identifying map tacks.

Are the coats to be unzipped in spring?
Unlikely, for hope is commandeered
With curdled whipped cream on top.


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 Reviews of "Curdled Whipped Cream"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 8, 2017
Actually, quite cheesy. I really like that line, "Life is the Buick of Cadillacs." And who's not, "Afraid of peach cobbler?"

While I'm sure I missed a number of references in these highly clever and creative lines. I think I understand the angst expressed.

Ron

Reviewed on January 8, 2017
as is well known, the whipped cream on top, although costs more, is easier of getting than the brown bread dough beneath. Once we get confused to distinguish the flowers from fruits, all the mess emerges in no time. Regrettably, it has already happened long ago. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 7, 2017
a cornucopia of poetry imagery topped with curdled whipped cream, a fitting symbol of the age. John

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on January 7, 2017
To express this dysfunctional world in any less degree of absurdity would do a disservice to the sane of us needing some comic relief. Metaphors abound in stanza after stanza, each developing to the last one that says it all. Imagination at its best.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 7, 2017
This is worth the read just for the originality of the metaphors. But you have laced them together into a coherent whole while showing us the absurdity of life through a prism that no one has ever heard of, much less looked through. It caught me off guard in that I expected curdled whip cream to be the ending to a short love affair. How mundane is that? You are one-of-a-kind with omnidirectional talent.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 7, 2017
I'm sorry, but I didn't get this one. However it did remind me of Simon & Garfunkel's At The Zoo. None the less, it was an interesting write full of imagery.


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