One way to write it out. Get rid of the thoughts that haunt. The thoughts that hark back to a time when innocence was taken advantage of by harsh and cruel behavior manipulation and abuse.
Keep breaking free with every word and when you reach those golden years, live them in a golden way with no regrets and no more bad dreams.
I could spot your poem in a roomful of poems without names
attached. Few adjectives and adverbs, nouns that fit perfectly,
and always a fresh portrait of a story that I have never read before--or even thought about. Clean lines, sharp wit, great ending.
I hope it is true that some people can overcome the horror of abuse. I am 70 now and it still seems to control my life in one way or another. I could never express it in the most elegant way that you do, Danae. Sad, but moving in a haunting way.
Your poem lays bare the struggles of many abused children and adults. The inner-sanctum most can retreat to for comfort and solace is denied far too many who suffer the out of control physical and mental behavior of those who would desire dominion and dominance over the innocent. Bravo for speaking out for so many, some of which many of us will come in contact within our lifetime. To those who do, compassion and love are perhaps the only time-proven healing powers such victims need. Again, bravo for your ability to poetically wordsmith such a complex subject.
My second book is about a boy who has Asperger's Syndrome and is bullied to the point to where he shoots up his school. I have divided the excerpts from it into three parts: Before, during and after the shooting.
As deafness, illness, and demonic forces close in around him, Ludwig van Beethoven must summon his faith and genius to complete the Missa Solemnis—a sacred masterpiece he believes could bring divine light into a darkening world.
Keep breaking free with every word and when you reach those golden years, live them in a golden way with no regrets and no more bad dreams.
Ron
attached. Few adjectives and adverbs, nouns that fit perfectly,
and always a fresh portrait of a story that I have never read before--or even thought about. Clean lines, sharp wit, great ending.