I cannot know the psycho-bio resonance of your words, but I feel the purity of your heart, and mine is there beating with yours with every lub-dub it makes.
As your poem posits, there are many currents one can get drawn into in life, and your experience of how the gravity of sadness can pull one down is evident. However, beneath it all, there's hope for as you say: "Lava cools". Of note is the way you've woven your metaphors into each other, giving both a biological and psychological resonance that wordsmiths us into the currents with you. A memorable work to read often.
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