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Forgive Us
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For what we have done, forgive us. Driven you insane with our compromising behaviour. Living at the edge, with no worries. Partying even when you least expect us to. Our dress code, a bit too revealing. Competitive we are, with our mates. Sometimes shaky on where we stand in life. We make mistakes,but we learn from them. Someday soon, we will come to that place of maturity. We won't drive you insane anymore and our thinking will rhyme with yours. I say, forgive us for what we have done. We are only young... Copyright 2014 Mary Elshaday

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 27, 2014

The sooner we learn how not to make these life-changing mistakes and grow up, the less likely we'll have to ask for forgiveness. Some things done by youth can't be forgiven because they cause destruction that can't be corrected.

Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau

Reviewed on April 27, 2014

All have fallin short but it's how we pick ourselves up the really counts. Wonderful poem!

Kathy

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on April 26, 2014

I read it more than once. I'm not good at praying, but your poem offered some ease. Thank you.

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn

Reviewed on April 26, 2014

You touch my heart right in the center. Makes me think God sent these words for me especially. I take them! Thank you very much! God is indeed good! By the way, compared to God we are all young, but maybe that's what you meant. God bless, sis, D.T.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on April 26, 2014

Yes, wonderful poetic thoughts of forgiveness!
Of course you will be forgiven, after all Saul became Paul.
He is the perfect example of the Lords grace.
I see a smile on your face.
Keep smiling, you were fearfully and wonderfully made.
The Lord has GREAT plans for you Mary.
You are a blessed child of God.
Jesus loves you and so do I.
Amen!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 26, 2014

Yes, He will forgive us, because no one was born knowing everything already. Our lives are filled with failures and triumphs. Each step we take is a learning process to perfection.

Sandie

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