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discrepancies and distinctions
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Tuesday, September 13, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 discrepancies and distinctions

 
amazing isn't it
that we all come
from the same Source
yet none of us are
the same
unique in our own
chracteristics
and features
a myriad of experiences
had set the differences
a multitude of Beings
each having
their own life's expressions
 
oh how many times
have we witnessed
various night skies
containing the same
stars and full moon
yet our memories
of it vividly paint
distinct hues and colors
even the emotions
of those moments
were never alike
 
how many sunsets
and sunrises 
have we seen
yet never taking
them for granted
still snatching our breaths
stopping each time
in our thoughts
or physical movement
just to catch the view
as if it's always the first time
we are seeing it
 
how many kisses
have sent jolts
to our hearts
even though they are
from the same 
lips and tongue
the thrill-
always wanting more
and never enough
 
how two lines
are so dissimilar
yet originating from
the same dot
the thickness
and stress
have their own
stroke variations
 
how the same 
exact stories
are being told
over and over
yet each time
having a spectrum
of impact
from bewildered eyes
of an enthralled audience
to none at all
 
how a song
had been sung
a thousand times over
one version 
can move you to tears
and the other
trigger you 
with so much laughter
 
i still marvel
how the days
become monotonous
yet we label them
from gravely insignificant
to becoming
alice in wonderland
catching you off guard
with life's beautiful surprises
 
no matter how
things appear similar
there are always 
discrepancies
and distinctions  
that sets it apart
becoming its 
own individual
 
so dear,
why compare yourself
to others
when even our moments
are distinguishable
in so many angles
why they are different
you ask?
 
well child,
every point of you
in this space and time
bears a different frequency
you are never the same
for at each moment
you are different
 
and since you are the one
who animates the scene
breathing life to it
you are also
the one 
creating the contrasts
at its most
subatomic level
 
simply saying, child
the secret ingredient
has always been you
you are- 
the magic touch
for none is comparable
to anyone
we are uniquely ourselves
yet we are one.

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 Reviews of "discrepancies and distinctions"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 14, 2022
What a wonderful review about how we are all alike and different at the same time. It's called intelligence and communication. We can't live without both. And you're so right about comparing ourselves to others. I spent my time here finding out how other authors, like you, are so different from me, yet I can still read your poems and understand what you are trying to tell me. Isn't it wonderful?

This one is your very best, so far.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 13, 2022
Rarities of the Indigo duo supporting the higher mind on outerspace frequency in company with the moon and stars without codependency in contrast to that of a sinkhole when the ground can't support the land or the ocean floor in a subatomic created sinkhole, (sinking hole) enormous releases of methane, a potent greenhouse gas.


"no matter how
things appear similar
there are always
discrepancies
and distinctions"


Thus, contrary two lines? One has snowed and mimicked under the influence of a Russian wrath snorter, and the Mexican.


Thus Spake Zarathustra


"--A posturing wrath-snorter with waiting, a holy howl-storm from the mountains, an impatient one that shouteth down into the valleys: "Hearken, else I will scourge you with the scourge of God!"


"Not that I would have a grudge against such wrathful ones on that account: they are well enough for laughter to me! Impatient must they now be, those big alarm-drums, which find a voice now or never!"
-Friedrich Nietzsche


The other line authentic and a victim of brandjacking and tomfoolery.


The subatomic and cosmic universes encapsulated, you've written a sexy atom SMasher!


Duo

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 13, 2022
YOU ARE SO RIGHT; WE ALL COME FROM THE SAME SOURCE; THE ONE TRUE GOD WHO DESIGNED US ALL AND BLEW THE BREATH OF LIFE INTO OUR BEING. YET, WOW! THIS MAJESTIC GOD WHOM WE SERVE MADE BILLIONS OF PEOPLE WITH VARIED GIFTS AND ABILITIES...SO UNIQUELY DIFFERENT, NONE HAVING THE SAME PALM OR FOOT PRINT! INDEED, TRULY INGESTING OUR OWN INDIVIDUAL SELVES IS A TASK, BUT WITHIN THE LIGHT OF GOD... A WORTHY TASK. IT IS A PITY THAT SOME GET DISCOURAGED AND ENVIOUSLY DECIDE TO TRY AND CARBON-COPY SOMEONE ELSE, INSTEAD OF SEEKING TO UNDERSTAND AND APPRECIATE THEIR OWN EXQUISITE, GOD-MADE SELF. A FINE WORK, AUDRINE, ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Chris Grey
Reviewed on September 13, 2022
This is lovely and unarguably correct....[[|:-)


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