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freed
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, December 8, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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My first take on cleave poetry in form of two Haiku. As per Skeptic's Kaddish blog, you read the left hand first as one poem. Next, the right hand as the second piece. Then, the whole as the third integrating poem. Enjoy the mess.


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driven by a dream               a vision within


thousand possibilities          a seeker chained by belief


went over the bridge            freed by his own mind


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Reviewed on December 9, 2022
Interesting form and lovely poem.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 8, 2022
I'm not fond of highly structured, ultrashort poems. But it's not a mess, I see a clear meaning and I think you followed the rules exactly.

Ron


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