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Rustling with the Wind
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Monday, March 13, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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She ran into the open field

where the grass and wheat

uninhibitedly danced with the wind

as if freedom and peace communed

walking proudly at each other’s side

and I followed every sign

the brightly lit gaze

they have during the darkest

of nights

as it always led me

back to a familiar scent

of our quieter nights

when we mimicked

the sound of bugs and fireflies

the rustling wind echoing

with our every moan

tucked away in naivety

played with the dullness of innocence

hummed to the deepest

pleasure of the soul

breathe as I try to catch it

gone like the flickering lights

of distant stars fading

shining at different skies

it was the sweat and heat

that made us secured from the cold

but it was always

that sweet coy laughter

bringing such pleasure to my ears

oh that shine in your eyes

as we finish

the song of heavenly choirs

holding love tightly

in each other’s arms

life may have given us

a lot of grays under these sheets

but with you

the dullest of days becomes

a God given masterpiece

filled with vibrancy of colors

the lunacy of the moon

and a wide spectrum of chained delights

oh the madness of hanging oneself

upon the treacherous desires

of eager longing emotions

only to be fulfilled

by the person you love

oh how innocence revealed itself

only to be eroded

in the arms

of her sweet embrace

her fiery lips

and the softness of her skin

all the while-

I hear the bells

playing, rustling with the wind.

 


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 Reviews of "Rustling with the Wind"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on April 28, 2024
A beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on September 12, 2023
Your carefully chosen words provide the exquisite backdrop
That this beautifully written piece demands…
It is just enchanting Audrine…
I loved it!

Best wishes,
Diana…🌿

Reviewed on September 4, 2023
Lovely and lovingly penned.

Reviewed by Betty Jo Tucker
Reviewed on April 29, 2023

Thanks for Rustling with the Wind, Audrine! I went right along with you while reading your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Betty Jo Tucker

Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on March 23, 2023
My little Sis has blossomed into a beautiful flower. This was the story of love that would keep the heart and soul warm in any weather. Loved it…
PS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 15, 2023
A wonderful frolic through memory or desire. Would like to have gone with you.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 14, 2023
wow! I am almost speechless. Actually, I am.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 13, 2023
Feelings of love makes the world even more alive. Quite a romp here.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on March 13, 2023
such exquisite beauty in ever word Audrine, Love this .


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