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Sugared Up
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Why is this man looking so smug?!

Paul: "The trouble I went through..."

Thank you, guys, it was fun! :)) K xx


Poem Artwork


SUGARED UP


Soft Whisper dripping Honey Love
melts through a Caramel Heart;
Fudge Dreams oozing Eastern Delight
draw us close from far apart.

Strawberry Kiss on a Nut Secret
leads Caramel Charm to Hazelnut Caress;
Mocha Mystery is Orange Truffled
as the wrappers are undressed.

On the way to Hazelnut Heaven
at the end of the perfect day;
a chocoholics liquid dream
is The Man With The Milk Tray.


 

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 Reviews of "Sugared Up"
Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on June 10, 2006
I liked those adjectives, they add to the over-sweetening of the read...a sharp pun job!

D

Reviewed on June 3, 2006
A most tasty write! We worked up an appetite reading... see you in a few cup cakes!
B&R

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 30, 2006
sweet and alluring ... scrumptious!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on May 27, 2006

What woman wouldn't fall into temptation after this? Delicious work of art. ;-)

Chanti

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 27, 2006
This poem may make me fall off my diet. Absolutely scrumptious! LOL
And you got to meet Paul! I'm steamed in envy. ;-)

Nordette

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on May 27, 2006
Sensually delicious, Kate! Sensu-licious!!!! Yummy!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Who is the handsom geezer? Are they hubby n wife?
This is making the ole mouth water...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
LOL I just wrote a poem about Cosmic Sugar!!!
whoa! lol
Now I am hungry........
this is sweet enough to make someone's dentures rot! lol

wonderful pic.......looks like a good time!!!
You should have had someone take a shot with you in it too......three?
pax A

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Doesn't get any sweeter than this...yummy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
This is great, the best kind of natural sugar no saccharine! Love the pic and news, glad you guys got to meet and have a fun time.

eT

Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Hello, Tinky and Paul! Guess you two are having so much fun! Everything sounds so good and delicious. Wonderful write, Kate!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)



Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Sweet very sweet...hangover...in me head..got wine struck with a toucha lemon...played me mean... pulling those lamb chops apart...all flushed...but good giggles though. Feeling a little more meself this morning...Yip wine kicked me GOOD. But elephant juice did Paul a bit better, fell asleep spilling 'amalula' all over his bed....whahahaha...at the b&b...had to apologize for being such a sleepy head!!
Thank you guys for the best day spent in Bristol UK...see you in New York-New... York I hope!!

Love Tinks

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
A sweet potion, stirred with delicious rhyme, Kate!

Sage

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
The trouble was well worth the effort LOL, is that sunburn? methinks it may just be alcohol poisoning hehehe Amarula (elephant juice rules). The mystery of Mocha is a coffee enigma we are still trying to fathom, tasted like chocolate to me...lol. Catching up on Tinks' laptop for now, still on mi' travels...gonna see how many more off duty coppers pens I can collect LOLOLOLOL. Thank you both for a wonderful day/evening it was totally brill. Watchout USA we're on our way.

Paul;-)
The trouble I go too inspires such sweet offerings

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Very delicious way to start my day
Thanks for sharing this sweet poem:)
love and peace

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Tinky and Paul really look like they are having loads of fun, Kate. Just how many alcoholic beverages did they enjoy???!!!!

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
A simple confession to a confectionary cop-out,
confounded by a confused, but contained, consumer,
creating a commotion while communing over
compacted concoctions creating culinary casualties!
- Cute Bill


Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Kate
I'll have the mocha mystery...
Those guys look familiar in that pic...:)
Peter

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Kate,

I gained weight just reading this. (lol) Cool pic too.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
The last line . . . Gotta love it!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
When can I meet this man? LOL !!!! I love the poem. It's a sweet concotion of creative wit.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Ah Sweet Kate you just gave me the perfect diabetic's suicide if I should ever feel so inclined. lol "Sweet" write.

Fee


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