Of what use is a Nation to an individual without a Country, County or Community if the World is not his Collective heritage...
Villanelle: Nations barely survive the turbulence of international events
Nations barely survive the turbulence of international events
Yet end up in interpersonal relations with other nations
Nations rise and fall yet some hardly ever merit compliments
What great Luxuor grandeur falls now to Egyptian peasants
The glory of five thousand years broken by Arab civilisations
Nations barely survive the turbulence of international évents
What great good from just Asoka’s illustrious achievements
Held Hindu sub-continent together through Muslim invasions
Nations rise and fall yet some hardly ever merit compliments
What great Aristotelian tutorship of Alexander’s managments
Kept the shores of Peloponnese free of Xerxes’s Zoroastrians
Nations barely survive the turbulence of international events
What great King Wen’s hexagrams and King Wu’s comments
Inform the sacrifices of Mao’s Long March peregrinations
Nations rise and fall yet some hardly ever merit compliments
Do nations come together only to blow asunder fundaments
Nations apart every life deserves equal rights and conditions
Nations barely survive the turbulence of international events
Nations rise and fall yet some hardly ever merit compliments
I agree that nations are weakened by turbulence and they easily fall victim thereafter to bad government. In seeking partnerships for aid after the losses of turbulence, your poem suggests that they seek out partnerships with good countries rather than bad. For history has proven that if a country needs cooperation, joining bad countries only leads to worse.
From the land of the milked and honeyed here’s a few political faux pas and a bit of attitude exposed to the harsh light of a Canadian who actually has their own opinion.
Ron