Written, 6th February 2001
Photograph taken by Theresa Koch
Looking through my frost filled window
I get a different view
Every inch of every yard is twisted all askew
Looking through my life
I've had many different views
Things that now seem twisted by a young naive fool
Artificial visions set before my willing eyes
Reminds me of a different world with artificial lies
Artificial dreams wearing those artificial smiles
Like looking out this glass at this frozen artificial twisted sky
Here I sit and appellant to the higher court
From the things in ones life that I did resort
Gazing out at the fictitious crazy world outside
Letting things I’ve seen float about throughout my mind
Looking through my frost filled window
I get a different view
Every inch of every yard is twisted all askew
Looking through my life
I've had many different views
Things that now seem twisted by a young naive fool
Theresa, this is an excellent thought-provoking poetic composition. Hopefully as we gracefully age we are finally able melt through the frost and see beyond the artificial trappings, which often times strangle us to a point of non-functioning, and/or questioning what we are ready knew was true. Thank you for sharing your work. Take care.
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Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Your work is always intriguing and very well wrought........And, as always...... your picture fascinates.......ty for sharing this one.........Dani
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
"Looking through my frost filled window
I get a different view"
When one is young, things always seem a bit twisted, but as we age it all seems to take on a view of extreme clarity.
Awesome imagery Theresa..Enjoyed.
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You will enjoy the easy to read book that gives a glimpse into escorting. Enjoy the read.
This is not a drill. The attack on Pearl. They were the ghost planes of the night, deadly, illusive, sharp-clawed Black Cats. The Memoirs of ARM H.P. Lawrence, a Pearl Harbor survivor, Black Cat, and decorated war veteran.
She never felt safe at home as a young girl, and didn't understand why when she finally escaped she wasn't safe in the big wide world either ...effectively jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!
Love your photos and writes.....
\Add: Read My Frosty vs Frost !
TRASK
Par excellent - wonderful write ... great photo!
Robert
Thought provoking write, how often do we have these visions set before us, and are gullible enough to fall for them time and time again.
Warm hugs
Elga
thanks for sharing
enjoyed much
William .....peace
written, I know these feelings!Knowing Creator lets us see
the world as it really is!
Incredible photo!
Enjoyed both the poem and the pic.
I have enjoyed the reading of "FROST FILLED WINDOW".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
I get a different view"
perception is reality
SueB
Awesome imagery Theresa..Enjoyed.
Lisa
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Excellent observations....
Peter
this is powerfully and vividly expressed, rich in imagery and emotion. well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)