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So Long
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Farewell...


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How does one say goodbye,

to someone like you?

The best of all Grandmas

whose greatest wish

was to love

and be loved in return…

to be needed,

and to listen,

advise,

and console,

who gave and gave

till it hurt…

With an infectious sweet laugh

that could fill any room…

and remarkable memories

of good times

of sad…

of years fully lived…

I pray that you know

how much you’ll be missed…

and what you’ve always

meant to my life…

Your luminous light,

spread its wings,

flew away,

and my heart

doesn’t want to

let go…

But it’s not goodbye forever,

I’ll find you again…

Until then

I’ll just say “so long”.

 

Michelle Close Mills ©

 

Written in memory of my beloved grandmother, Merle Close-Stephens who passed away on May 24, 2005.  The photograph was taken of she and I in December of 2004, in Muncie, IN.  It was our last time together.






 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "So Long"
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 28, 2005
I don't know how I missed this, Michelle, but somehow I did. This is an absolutely beautiful, open and honest tribute to your Grandmother. I am so sorry for your loss, and so happy for you to have been blessed by her presence in your life for so many years. May her rest be peaceful and may your heart be strong until that time when you return to your eternal home and walk beside her again.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 29, 2005
Michelle, so very sorry for you loss. May she rest in eternal peace. Beautiful and loving tribute - my prayers are with you.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed on June 17, 2005
Wonderful photo. and tribute to your grandma. She must be so proud of you now.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 13, 2005
Dearest Michelle,
I've missed your work friend. This is such a tender tribute to a special person and it touched me deeply. I had an extremely close relationship with my paternal grandmother and miss her terribly. Each word you wrote reached into my inner core.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful work of art.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
What a wonderful and soul-reaching tribute, Michelle. My deepest sympathy and heartfelt sentiments to you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I loved this one.
I relate all too well,
and life is eternal and we are reunited.
Excellent write...enjoyed the read!

Rich Suarez

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Dear Michelle, what a beautiful tribute that goes right to the heart. I am deeply sorry that you have lost someone so dear to you. You are a born writer to be able to create fine poetry out of sadness.
CJ

Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Michelle,

I'm sorry for your loss. Your gramma sounds like a special person--this tribute is a beautiful honor to her memory.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Sorry for your loss, beautiful tribute to a woman who obviously taught you the true nature of love. Great write.

Reviewed on May 26, 2005
my condolences to you, michelle. it is obvious you loved your grandma; beautiful tribute! may god be with you in your grief!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
i am sorry for your loss

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Ah, Michelle, my heart goes out to you... We never get used to losing our loved ones; we merely learn how to live with the loss. Dwell on the time she was allowed to be with you. {{{Michelle}}}}

Peace.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
This is a sweet tribute but I know that like myself the real tribute will be in the act of being a grandmother youself and not only imitating but expounding on the loving principles and examples they set for us.

Felix

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Our Grandmothers live in our hearts and yours lives in your poetry.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Michelle My prayers and sympathy are with you. Never anyone like a grandmother, I'm happy you had many years of good relationship to remember. This is a lovely tribute to her, and I love the way you ended it, for it is, just a so long for awhile.

Love
Alrisha

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Oh "Michele" my little girl also died on the 24th of May!!

I think we have tw things in common now.your Grandmas deathdate and your name...being Michelle...spelled differently but still!!

My heart goes out to you dear friend!!

Sorry for your loss Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 25, 2005
I send you my condolensces I lost my grandma eighteen months ago, and I still miss her, I always will
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Condolances, but think you have had her all these years, as my grandmom passed when I was but 12 or so years old...you have clearly stated to her here in this poem a wonderful farewell...you ARE loved! Ed & Rufuz


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