Dreams were they, are they? felt so real! find myself wondering thinking apparition mind unblinking could it be ? maybe not can't be true yet no clue! foreign places I know not
scenes unreal!
hiways, biways sandy roads cottage there stands alone walking through downtown too yet this place is strangely new know my way yet I don't these are but, fragments shown!
Copyright Elga ~Indigo~ August 2004 - All Rights Reserved
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
If I had the chance, I would buy such a cottage, as shown on your pic. This would be my way of a dream becoming reality.
Excellent write.
Love this write! Brilliant creation! I've been there before! ...Maybe? ...or, Maybe not?
Thanks for sharing this treasure!
Cynthia
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Elga, this is great. Certainly life is and can be explained in fragmented pieces. What a easy way to measure moments. I am with Tinka this is unique...((hugs)) Fletcher B
I love the graphic...stole the image, if you must know...but also ;loved the work you created...life is so very fragmented and sometimes so hard to follow...this was a wonderful poem...
This is the dream I constantly have. It is surreal but down home sometimes. Like your poem...the beauty lifts while the mortal prefers to be grounded. This one is a keeper!
Susan
Beautiful write. "Mind unblinking" - love the image.
Cynthia
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Elga, I tend to agree with Poet La Belle Rouge. I know for a fact where I have never been somewhere before in this lifetime, yet I could clearly see and knew where everything was. A stunningly well-crafted and prepared composition my gifted friend. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent and timeless treasures. Take care and be well.
This is different and unique. It really sounds
like the remembrance of my dreams. I always wish
I could remember all of them, but maybe not huh?
;) Very good Elga!
Elga,
Wonderful write. Gives one a feeling of Deja Vu. Happens all the time. We spot something or someone and that familiar feeling passes over us. Well done. Love the picture also.
a moment of fugue, eh? i've had those moments, before...you swear you've been there, never have, when you get there, it all seems strangely familiar! niagara falls, n.y. was such a place for me...
thank you for sharing this thought provoking, beautifully illustrated verse :)
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Excellent write.
they are messengers...........
u either open the envelope or not
wonderful poem Elga.......pax A
beautifully written! Love the Kincaid art too!
Allen
peace
Love this write! Brilliant creation! I've been there before! ...Maybe? ...or, Maybe not?
Thanks for sharing this treasure!
Cynthia
Love Tinka
Susan
A definite feeling of Deja Vu here , Elga
Peter
Beautiful write. "Mind unblinking" - love the image.
Cynthia
like the remembrance of my dreams. I always wish
I could remember all of them, but maybe not huh?
;) Very good Elga!
Wonderful write. Gives one a feeling of Deja Vu. Happens all the time. We spot something or someone and that familiar feeling passes over us. Well done. Love the picture also.
yet I don't
definitely a strange feeling niggling at the back of your brain
sueb
a moment of fugue, eh? i've had those moments, before...you swear you've been there, never have, when you get there, it all seems strangely familiar! niagara falls, n.y. was such a place for me...
thank you for sharing this thought provoking, beautifully illustrated verse :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
*and thank you for all of your encouragement* :)