Denouement (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 12, 2006

I think we carry those we once loved in a tiny corner of our hearts. Once again, your words are perfect for the sentiment.

Janet

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

I can live with all the consequences
Of keeping a little piece of her
Rivetted way down inside my soul

Sometimes, that's all we can do, Peter.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

true love has no boundaries or farewells ...

the voice of passion and wisdom ring loudly in this poem, Peter ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Yes, lost love can be found again, I have seen it happen, if the love is true. Your writing shows the faith and belief in such love.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

So very true Peter!!

This cuts to the core!!

love tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

I never liked the word good bye, in fact I once wrote a poem "bad bye"there was nothing good about it;-) I like farewell better. This is a beautiful passionate poem of how true love is imprinted within us forever. We can't get rid of it even if we use every method known to man. Accept it and deal with it the best we can, enjoying the good memories of what was shared and forgetting the rest....Thanks for sharing Peter!Love that art!

Eileen^

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

So true, your words are tugging at the heart.
I like this...
(For when you love like we did
You can never say goodbye
Because goodbye is a dirty word
That just should never be said)

This one is a keeper for me.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Lost love can be rekindled and it should be if there's a strong feeling to do so. Even though the clock wound down for the love we had for someone in another year, it can be rewound and that awesome life-giving tick reset. You see, in those years, why love didn't keep accurate time was because we were not ready. We had growing to do and now that we have grown and found peace, spirituality, and quality time for love, we can now invite it in our hearts as a Whole. Thanks Peter.

Sage

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Passionately and tenderly expressed, Peter!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Peter,

This is a wonderful write; always a job well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Peter,

So true, your beautiful write. That's why I don't say good bye. I say, see you later; that way, there's always hope....

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.