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That That Was Lost
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" The Way to Heaven is to be found within your Soul "

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I was searching for that that was lost today

deep within the realms and chambers of my soul

a simple link betwixt the past and the present

but oh how it meant so much to me

a tangible connection with my dearest thoughts

means much more than a billion words could say

so meticulously I retraced my steps and ways

the process of  gentle elimination is the key to it all

a little piece of crumpled paper, with decorations of you and me

remnants and residues that resonate in our hearts

seperating the good from the bad

ushering in the light of discernment and tact

that scans the darkest recesses of my mind

and uncovers all my vulnerabilities and sensitivities

that may conceal any traces of hidden pride and ego

for to remain objective in the face of adversity

puts the demons of fear to full flight

and gives the injured soul, so much succour and delight

gathering in the qualities of equilibrium and balance

we can kickstart our lives again

brimming with supreme confidence

with regenerative streams and rivulets

of all consuming and radial love

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
 

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 Reviews of "That That Was Lost"
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
We have to agree witht he board, a most beautiful poem with a wonderful message! Whenever we think you've done your best, you just top it off with another stunning piece of poetry,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Peter,

This is the level of art that one has to revisit several times to grasp the remarkable quality and depth. Excellent!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Dear, Dear Peter - It's me again - Sounds like the writings of 'St John of The Cross' Beautiful, Beautiful Poetry and so terribly deep - To find the true meaning one must make a search of mind as you did. Always a pleasue to read your work.

Reviewed on May 12, 2006
Excellent write here Peter, keep up the great writing
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Wonderful write! Faith's rejuvenating, reawakening power is never ending, it is a great gift from God, to keep us focused and help us return to our true reason for being: to have and share such love!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Harmony is found in the soul. It is where we find the peace the outside world doesn't give to us no matter how hard we look. It's inside and your verse Peter ...it is a map... if only those who seek themselves will read.

Susan

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
always enjoy your thoughtfully balanced poems ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Only You Could Draw It So Romantically Write On...

TRASK

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Superbly powerful write Dear Peter!
Your opening quote says it all: "The Way to Heaven is to be found within your Soul"
And I love: "..the process of gentle elimination is the key to it all.."
And, "..to remain objective in the face of adversity puts the demons of fear to full flight and gives the injured soul, so much succor and delight gathering in the qualities of equilibrium and balance..." Equanimity rules ... the middle way is the balanced way!
Love your deep heartfelt, introspective poem offering sacred wisdom!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Deep and intense introspective look at what time has done and what time shows ahead. Finding new hope and new strength in love is what God offers us all.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Insightful powerful write!

Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Wonderful piece of work, Peter; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Much to contemplate in this deep piece, Peter.

Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Peter,

A wonderful sharing with a profound, healing message within its lines; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
(((Peter ))) you have such a divine way about your inner true reflections that it gives the reader a frozen in time, profound oneness with healing, grace, mercy, love and the awareness of your consciousness centered in light, love and forever harmony. Dear man you are so ultra conscious in spirit and in mind. Your wisdom comes from the great master thinkers. The reader sees such a profound heart of gold you have and how deeply articulate you are about the spiritual side of seeing and feeling, yet it being silent and seen only through the heart…This piece speaks so deeply profound in me. You have such a way of taking a memory and painting it with such intensity of heavenly grace. This piece shows that your very attuned to the beauty of love and it’s all forms of endearing senses of all kinds of love. It is simply gorgeous and stated so precious. This as like all your forms of your beautiful poetry writes are gifted with that sense of knowing what is right, is definitely light. Thank you Peter for this stunning write. Keep them coming for a long time..

((( Love And Intercession, Dove )))

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
There is a powerful element of redemptive hope within this poem, Peter. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Once we know the problem the solution is at hand.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Thanks for sharing this insightful and uplifting poem!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
You are a man of steadfast principles and faith which will see you through anything even the darkest night of the soul! Those like yourself that are such an inspiration to others sometimes lack being aware that they too need uplifting. Your poetry is always splendid and as you have said to me,and others, I'm right there with you! You are an example to all! Bless you and thank you!

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
"we can kickstart our lives again"
I really wish I can.
Exquisite and uplifitng poem
thanks for sharing
Love and peace

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Ever the optimist and I love optimism, although I am not much of the time. This is close to you, this poem, very. I can only say, you will persevere. Good people always do.


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