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It's Me That You Need
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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The moving finger writes; and having writ, moves on: nor all thy piety nor wit shall lure it back to cancel half a line nor all thy tears wash out a word of it."

  Omar Khayyam



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The swallows, swifts and house martins have returned again

back to their summer houses in the sun

a round trip of ten thousand miles

they know love has no bounds

and the parameters of sentiment are fluid

I quietly reflect, and muse on the future

knowing the die has been cast from the start

all those preambles and false dawns

were just a precursor to you

and like the spider spins his web

with wondrous gossamer threads

and swifter than the peregrine falcon can fly

with flapping and whirring wings

you have spread your encompassing magic

deep within this tender man's heart

for all my life I have wondered

just how love would really feel

would it sweep me off my feet

and spin me just like a carousel

or is it just a beguiling reflection of infatuation

a fleeting ghost and phantom still

all I know is that love is indefinable

there is no golden rule

and like the ant that scales the hill

there is another one that will fail

but you sweetheart came unannounced

straight out of the vast blue sky

catching me quite unawares

just like lightning strikes the ground

and now the answers are all delivered

by an angel who carries your name

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
  

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 Reviews of "It's Me That You Need"
Reviewed by Linda Dousay
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Beautiful...both gentle and strong...I am speachless...I simple have no words to express the beauty. Linda

Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Stunningly beautiful, in perfect harmonie with the wonderful picture. A true master piece!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
...the beauty...is the serendipity. splendid artistry, Peter!

love & blessings ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2006
AAaaawwwwwwww.. This deeply speaks to me..Yes true love is spiritual and has no reins of the empty carnal. It is endless, never judging, never taking it's love away, never jealous, always gives,always HOPES, always patient,always the closest as our Lord And Saviour, who put His life down for His best friends.. {{{{I get real teary here with smiles }}} I'm speechless....

(((Love Forever, Dove )))

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2006
"The swallows, swifts and house martins have returned again
back to their summer houses in the sun
a round trip of ten thousand miles
they know love has no bounds" <grin> Beautiful, beautiful.

Indeed Love knows no bounds and it completely removes the yoke of fear that keeps the human heart inprisoned in itself. Love is the untaming of the heart, the free souls greatest gift, and the spirit of life pounding furiously in the world longing to touch another heart with the gladness, peace and joy that is uncomparable to any other grace we are give in this earth.

Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Another amazing poem Peter
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
captivating and meticulously penned ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
I love the feeling, and the imagery used in this piece. It comes across as heartfelt and genuine...just lovely. Michelle

Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Great lines full of deep thoughts. Well done

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
My feelings exactly, awesome. aint it? Art

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
You are an incredible romantic Peter......
the images here
are so gentle yet at the same time so intense
this is a materpiece of thought and emotion
ty for sharing this with the den
pax A

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
WOW. Magical lines, Peter
Again am speechless to describe the wonders in your poem
love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
An utterly deep piece of your soul poured on this page!!

This poem written by an angel carrying your name!!

Thank you for sharing Peter!!


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Peter you always surprise me with joy when I read you! This is such a beautiful poem, it moves deep inside the heart and touches the soul! I also love the unusual picture! Splendid work as always!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Love catches you unawares, but the heart knows when it is captured.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Oh Dear Peter,

This poem is a genuine masterpiece! What an honour and pleasure it is for me to share this life with a poet like you whom I can also call my friend. Many, many blessings.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
Your thoughts build the dream and the door opens to love. Yout heart is full and sharing a glimpse with us is a poets a gift and reading it is a privilege..therefore I appreciate you Peter.
Susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2006
What the "encompassing magic" takes us over, the real meaning of life begins. Beautifuul poem.


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