kinda sad Fee
like the song by harry chapin:
and me I'm ridin in my taxi,
takin tips and getting stoned

I love the sweet sensousness of this poem Fee!
Warmly and sweetly done and felt!
I feel that bittersweetness you write/feel!
WArm hugs and Warmer love, Warrior Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
A gem I will treasure!!!

Felix this is oh so innocently sensuous~I just love it!

This poem touched me deeply. Being in love with a friend and not being able to express the feelings is a double edged sword. A poignant story told beautifully. Lydi**

Good write. It brings up memories of those times in life where we cared a bit more for someone then they wanted from us. I do know that feeling. Every year when I go to my daughters where I use to live there is that special exchange with someone. A romance that almost got off the ground. Lady J

Very touching piece Felix!!

LOVE Tinka

Somehow, dear Fee, this brings a lump to my throat... because it's so very touching, and then, a big, warm smile from the heart to my lips... because it's so very sweet. And... I do believe she will hear those words from your heart very clearly, even if the lips fail to utter them, my friend.
Love & {{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}
Alexandra*

Felix, enjoyed this read very much,

Thanks,
Dan

Dear Fee,

When the heart speaks, the words can be trusted and it's never too late to say "I Love You".

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Fee,

Few can pen romance like you; you pour heart and soul into each word and make the reader feel the poem, not just read. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Excellent choice of words to convey this simple tale of love. Your metaphors are really good and help bind the piece together. Enjoyed!

George

This is a beautiful write sweet cuz.

Love & hugs
Selena

this makes me want to sing a million songs.
maybe... dont get me wrong by the pretenders most of all.

dont get me wrong
if im acting sorta distracted
im thinking about the fire works
that go off when you smile

i think seeing an old 'love' in the street would have to be the most awkward thing.
i somehow manage to fall for boys who arent in the same country as me which, while the leaving part sucks, means i dont have to bump into them in the street and cry or kiss them or whatever i would do.
but when your heart hasnt quite moved on like the other persons has... well... that makes everything so rough...

if you see me walkin down the street
and i start to cry each time we meet
walk on by... walk on by

a million songs...

a most outstanding write Fee, enjoyed the soft, tender reading of your words...hugs, Peggy

Raindrops in my eyes. Great phrase. Lovely poem of an unfulfilled love. Victor

Oh Sweetpea! You are such a beautiful and gentle man and this fact is reflected in your awesome poetry! HUGS! SC

such a beautiful write-you are truly a master , Fee

Truly beautiful,you have melted me...Hugsssssss

This is so beautiful, I so look forward to reading what you write, I feel I have gooten to know you well enought to even read what you don't put on paper. Thank you for sharing .

Love ya Cuz XOXO Rose

Another dimension,As I surrender, only to sigh...Moving piece,Jen

Fee,
Very beautiful, very romantic and very sweet...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Perfect poetry in a mosr Fee-able way!(not feeble!) Fee Able. As only you can create!

Pure romance in this delightful poem.

Simply beautiful writing, Fee; very well done! BRAVO, my friend, BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D