“I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the skies
and all I ask is a tall ship and a star to stare her by…”
John Masefield
The Remains
By: Fee
Like bleached whalebones
That littered once our shore
It’s a glimpse of the past
We seldom see anymore
Spiced by salt in the wood
Just like old fishermen’s lore
The faded name on the hull
Is now threadbare and worn
While her anchor rope hangs
Among the rose bushes thorn
As she sits alone on the banks
Alone and looking so forlorn
Three generations worked her
Hands lovingly scarred by the sea
Until then the big foreign ships
Just couldn’t let her nets be
While the fuel’s rising cost
Brought honest men to their knee
Now the ghosts of her past
Like the wind through her cracks
Still sing the old sea shanties
Along forgotten slipway tracks
And the old timers run out a yarn
As they sit in their old fishing shacks…
bleached whalebones, spiced by salt in the wood, Where do you get these honest thoughts... Amazing SWEET FEE!Old sea shanties, ghost in her cracks! Appreciation is being felt through out this beautiful sad salty sea haunt! YOU have sea-man in your Soul, right to the bone SWEETIE!And.. I'm sorry you had too, but glad you made it through, without your memories all this wouldn't be felt all over again!As sad as it must have been, they were proud memories for many!
This will haunt me....
I hope it's going to in pages upon an old sea-mans book! WE NEED ONE! Can you oblige!?
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
I love the opening simile - it sets a haunting tone for the rest of the poem. This also has a quaint feel which reveals your love for the sea and your sadness for times gone by. Nicely written with strong imagery. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
As an old sailor, I am with you all the way.
Georg
Regis
Sandie Angel :(
Missed ya
Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings - Micke
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Myrna
(((HGUS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Haunting tale, my friend. A boat once vibrant with noise, with men working, joking, laughing, now in tomblike silence. Yes, its sad. Amazing imagery in this poem, Fee. Excellent as I've come to expect from you.
Huggs and Blessings,
~Linda
like an ole memory of her reserve
her bounty no more to sail the waves of this sea
a crest of her bow broken and batter leaving her ore to no more ancor the sea....
I Love The Picture Fee & the lovely poem
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose