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Time Apart
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Every now and then I have the privalege of doing a collaboration with one of the "movers and shakers" on AD...Ms.Michelle Mead is one such poetess and in this write we explored the feelings young love goes through upon breaking up and reuniting...enjoy...


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Time Apart

By: Michelle Mead and Fee

 

While you were gone

I cleaned the cobwebs from my head

I shook the memories from my bed

Took all your pictures to the shed

While you were gone

 

While I was gone

I told the mirror I'd be just fine

I remembered you were never mine

Wondered if it all was just a sign

While I was gone

 

While you were gone

I patched up my broken heart

I pledged to make a brand new start

Tried hard not to fall apart

While you were gone

 

While I was gone

I danced thru night and into day

Called my friends to get their say

Swore to take a trip to old Bombay

While I was gone

 

While you were gone

I thought of dialing nine-one-one

I avoided having any kind of fun

Wondered who had stole the sun

While you were gone

 

While I was gone

Watched Bridget Jones and Jane Eyre

Dreamed of Cary Grant without a care

Challenged my cat to a deadlock stare

While I was gone

 

While you were gone

I cried myself to sleep each night

I left over the door a burning light

Wished I could make things right

While you were gone

 

While I was gone

Kleenex became my new best friend

Chocolate seemed a true Godsend

I stitched this heart but it didn't mend

While I was gone

 

I’m glad you’re back

I vow I’ll never again let you go

Each day I’ll vow to love you so

This love was only meant to grow

I’m glad you’re back…

 

          I’m glad I’m back

because with you I remember me

and when you smile you're all I see

with you is the only place to be

I’m glad I’m back

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Time Apart"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
This felt like a realistic break-up. I'm glad it ended on a happy note! Nice melee` of emotions in this poem.
Sheila

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Delightful collaborative work; enjoyed this union of two very talented voices.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
What a lovely collaboration this poem is about love and hurting. I loved the way the both of you entwined your words. Wonderful.
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Awesome the voices made it sound so real
as if I were there listening
As you talked to each other
love the uniqueness of this piece
A fantastic Collaboration!
Peace Love and Hugss to both...Morning Star

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
an enchanting mixture of two voices speaking as one ...

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Such a lovely writing by the two of you. Please do it again.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
.... they say absence makes the heart fonder,,, well done Michelle and Fee! Enjoyed
:)Christine

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Wow! I had to slowly read this one through twice to grasp the full impact of two lovers torment until again they were together. What a fantastic job you both have done! Bravo.......

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Wonderfully expressive! Heart-feelingly romantic! (Sigh) I enjoyed.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
so lovely and poetically romantic! An excellent collaboration!

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Enchanting write with a bit of wit to boot :)! 'HE' seemed to be enjoying the solitude; she was in mourning! That's the difference between men and women--men seldom 'cave' while women not only cave, they sink!
You two should write together more often! Bravo!

Sandy

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Such a beautiful write, with the unusual twist of what two people feel while they are apart.

Mary

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Lovely writing ,well done indeed....stay safe and well sweet Fee....Hugss

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Wonderful collab, you should do more!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Tis' a beautiful rendering...ed

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
What a beautiful entertwining of poets love write. Great job you two, lovely and flows like you were also of single mind and thought. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Gorgeous pen, Michelle and Fee - well done! That piccy is beautiful, too.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
this should be a song......kudos to you both

loved these stanzas lol

While I was gone

and this one

While you were gone

I thought of dialing nine-one-one

I avoided having any kind of fun

Wondered who had stole the sun

While you were gone


Kleenex became my new best friend

Chocolate seemed a true Godsend

I stitched this heart but it didn't mend

While I was gone

pax A :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Fee,
This is one of the best collaborations I've read. Simply beautiful and I love the ending. BRAVO to you and Michelle. You both did a fantastic job!

Many blessings
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Quite a collaboration, Mr. Fee!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
i love this--such heartache with a happy ending!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Nice collaboration, Michelle and Fee!!! I presume that those in black ink are Michelle's, and those in blue ink are Fee's. I'm happy at the ending when the young couple got back together. Wonderful work on both!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Sorry Fee, I don't want to be disrespectful of a verey good and bittersweet poem, but i got bogged in at your phrase "challenged my cat to a deadlock stare" because I couldn't kick my mother in retalation I took what was most precious to her, her white angora cat to a "deadlock stare" until it saw inside my eyes something that scared its wits and it ran like its tail was in fire with that protesting hight pitch meow.
Anytime I looked at his eyes it took just two or three seconds and he was out of there, mentally I was contemp sneering at my mother.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Wilson
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Lovely work and beautiful collabortation. I like the two different points of view, and how one seems to answer the other.

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Beautiful collab, Michelle and Fee; brava! Bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love to you both, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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