I like this, it takes me away and makes me think of unspoken offers and the magic in the fact that they need no words to make them live because they are alive in the soul of the other person.
such classic love-heart sentiments, darlin Felix. Could we woven into a sampler, a quilt, a heart-shaped cushion stuffed with lavender... It's the perfect verse to be printed on a Victorian valentine... Love poetry so fine and sublime that even that mischievous Cupid might weep.... :)) xx
Everything you write is perfect Fee, I am so happy you share with us.
Your words shouldn't come cheap for they are worth a lot.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Reviewed by Gypsy Soul (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Oh ! YOU Wudaful ! Wudaful ! Kat,
4 Whata FEE A Kat Man Do That ? ? ?
Twist Turn Perry Thrust ! ! !
HelpthA You az YOU X Thy Log ! ! !
'n' in Thy Word'z One Shall VOICE 'N' In Thy TRUST...
Love'n'Light
Gypsy.xxx
Yer ! Well ain't gunna be that eaZZZy 4 You unless YOU can read me Ha ! Ha ! Ha !
Peace OUT.xxx
the most integral things are actions
which always speak louder than words....and sometimes those actions are also a contradiction to the integral words....
but through your poem we can feel the embraced gifts of your words in action :)
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
...sweet poem...such a beautful ending that makes one smile :)...love the title 'Unspoken Offers', I agree they are important as well..and gave me much to ponder...great poem Fee!
Christine
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2009
beautifully said, enjoyed this. though I might think of borrowing a few of your words for inspiration. LadyJ
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Hugs,
Anna
Sheila
Oh for it to be a reality!!
XX Ch'erie
Your words shouldn't come cheap for they are worth a lot.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
4 Whata FEE A Kat Man Do That ? ? ?
Twist Turn Perry Thrust ! ! !
HelpthA You az YOU X Thy Log ! ! !
'n' in Thy Word'z One Shall VOICE 'N' In Thy TRUST...
Love'n'Light
Gypsy.xxx
Yer ! Well ain't gunna be that eaZZZy 4 You unless YOU can read me Ha ! Ha ! Ha !
Peace OUT.xxx
Carole~
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Myrna
Fee...you rock!
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
which always speak louder than words....and sometimes those actions are also a contradiction to the integral words....
but through your poem we can feel the embraced gifts of your words in action :)
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Beautiful, romantic, love the last line! You only get better, Fee.
Blessings and huggs,
~Linda
Christine