Hit and Run (song) (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Hit and Run (song)
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Just a rough draft of a country music song idea that came to me, will try putting some chords to it later...hope ya'll like. lol

*She left my world in shattered* 　　　　　　　　 Hit and Run Chorus: Boom boom baby’s on the run Wrecked another heart for sure Boom boom’s baby on the run Boom boom once and then no more (Chorus) She hit me hard on my blind side And drove me like a tinker toy She rode a supercharged-up smile Her sparkling eyes blinded this old boy (Chorus) She was sleek and smooth and sexy She was hotter than a Texas day She left my world in shattered pieces Than she just up and rode away… (Chorus twice) 　 She curtailed my independence scratched off my macho veneer She crushed my over-inflated ego It was truly a hit and run I fear Won’t someone call the wrecker ambulance and traffic cop I done run into her brick wall my heart brakes failed to stop

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 20, 2010

Well done, Fee. This is fun and playful. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 19, 2010

It's got a nice ring to it Fee. hugs J

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on March 16, 2010

Fee, Excellent country Lyrics! I can hear the music in my head. Take care, ~Chessly

Reviewed by George Carroll

Music will only ehnance it all the more.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

...LOVE THIS!!!!!

Reviewed by Morning Star

Fee I truly love this lyrics
I wish i could here it with music
I it sounds great just reading it i
can just imagine accompany by string
Beautifully done!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Light...Yolie

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

My toe is tapping Fee. Great job!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Fee,
One of your best. Very clever, you have yourself a hit here.

Blessings+
~Linda

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

It should be sung with a twang complaining nasal voice...and a swig of tequila!!! heeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaaw

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Sure down Country tune, I can hear the Chords now Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

okay, this is great-get this one off to nashville!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Hilarious lyrics, Fee!!! This would be a hoot put to music....

Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Them hit and run women can really wreck a guy's heart, but they do make for a great song.