You and your works are "bathed in a rainbow"--the imagery and diction of this poem are astoundingly perfect, Fe.

Fee one of my favors thing is to see the new day rise
And at times i do feel blue as i watch the night fade
Yet i feel peaceful
Your words captured such beautiful images
Your words are as magical as the dawn of a new day
Brilliant write!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light...Yolie

Felix, as a witness to more of this time of day than most men, I am enthralled in the mystery of each new day's birth more than the lingering death of the night-- so to me, it is a time of euphoria -- I suppose it is all in the individual perception -- and I do not consider myself to be the optimistic type -- if anything, I lean toward the other side of optimism most of the time -- a sort of, show me type -- your verbiage in this poem is chosen with great skill -- I enjoyed it much -- peace nd love be with you, especially at the time just prior to, new morn -- Jon Michael

You expressed these emotions beautifully, Fee. A strong sense of loneliness in this. Almost haunting.... Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Nice I see your point, very well written

My muse doesn't stop to rest much either, Fee. You drew me into the emotions portrayed in this poem. Well done!

Hugs,
Anna

somber tones paint beauty too...
Love & Blessings
Vickie

Cuz you have done it again as you took us to the window with you and we felt that blue shadow come over us and only to thankful for the beautiful rainbows that appear. Another great write Felix.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Fee, I was captivated by this write. It is beautiful and full of emotion. An incredible sence of the blues... Bravo!

I too love the last little hour before the sun comes up-- reminds me of my youth-- how I hated getting up at 4:00 am to milk the cows or set the wheel lines for the day! But something was magical about that hour too-- and I never was sorry once I did get up and get going. The wind stops and listens-- and there is silence, as if God were planning-- getting ready, and then, slowly, the world is imagined into existence again. I like your rainbows bathing the night sky-- full of colorful dreams, I bet. You're a sweet guy with a big heart. --Charlie

Fee, as I read this you took me into those moody blues..thank goodness for rainbows eh? Great work as always :)
Hugs,
Chrissie

Yes Fee. I have felt this way when I have awakened a bit too early. At times, this has left me as thought "on the edge" of something; although I'm never sure what. An effective sharing, friend. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Fee I could feel the emotions and know that you are not the only one that has experienced this...When I am at the shore, I love to be out before dawn, (it's much cooler then) and imagine what kind of glorious day will enfold..
Dreamers and ocean lovers will relate to this wonderful poem.

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

THE DARKEST HOUR IS SURELY...JUST BEFORE DAWN...AND...SANITY(SMILE). YOU ARE NOT ALONE...THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL WORK AND HAPPY EASTER TO YOU! LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Powerful and exceptional poetry.

i love that time of day, but it can feel lonley, i like your words about pretending-sometimes, that is thwe way we get through

I kind of liked the First Dog Watch but never the Second one, when the sun got in your eyes was when Charlie wanted to be funny. That's what we called the blue hours, because they gave us the blues!

Georg

That first paragraph I liked, it says a great deal about you...e

This is so beautiful. I could definitely picture myself there.