The open words of needful feelings are absolutely riveting! A hauntingly familiar scenario that most will connect with. Deep reflections of the soul; a powerful read. Joy L. Hale

The yearning and ache are all to familiar Felix. Succinctly you have captured the emotion yet ceded no poetic beauty my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

One of my favorites of yours, Fee. I love the form, simplicity, essence and overall style of this composition. It speaks volumes with so few words. As Axilea says, "expressive."

Love the raw intensity...the vulnerability, Fee. Quite different from your recent work. Great:)
Sheila

AH...these feelings I know so well..longing 'of' only felt~
Hugs,
Chrissie

This is very deep Felix and has a lot of emotion. This is how I feel when I get down in the dumps and need my mother to cling to. But I sit drowning in my sadness and the rain that comes in the form of tears, never seems to stop. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always and by your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Deeply felt and penned from the soul.

Felix, I have just read this poem on a rainy, windy day, so I really get the mood. "Drowning", "baring", "future in gloom", "chilled to the bone"... very expressive.

Axilea

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

I feet the pain
when love is just a
river of tears
~Fee~
It takes great poetry
to convey this, as You have

Lady Vivian

A tortuous ache that is keenly felt through your words, Fee. Heart-wrenching. ~Elizabeth

Seems sad, Fee...(and wet)

Profoundly moving and full of anguish, but with such beautiful love to sweeten the sorrow ~
Blessings,
Christine

Fee - spoken from your heart. Your woman hear's you!

Deb

love this!

Wow!!! Felix,
You Are Such A Groovy Kat!!!
How Sublime...
Different Hemisphere'z 'n' Time Line...
You Have Taken Tha Word'z Write Outta My Ink Fill'd Quill...


Love Light 'n' Peace
Gypsy...xxx


Blessed BE!!!

Words spoken so touching indeed well done as always Laura

Fee, this is so deeply moving. Everything about this has an eerie sense of longing and hopelessness...Raise yourself up and breath!!!
All will be better soon. Look out at that beautiful moon tonight and let go of all past burdens, you will be illuminated!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

So agonizingly sweet and vulnerable. Love it. Liz

Hauntingly beautiful, Fee! Powerful impact of both your poem and the pic....

Hugs,
Anna

Very touching indeed sweet Fee ...you brought tears running down my face....Hugsss

Women... Seems like they're either our salvation,,, or our downfall.

Still, we keep coming back for more.... and more.

Nicely done Fee.

Thanks Dick.

very sweet and touching...with the fonts playing their charm... :)best wishes.neerja