Interruptus Motorhead (poem) by Paul Williams on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2005

Well I love it!! The candle of hope I like that and the last line... perfection!!! ***** 5 stars for the whole kit n kaboodle that your mind the music and your pen poured out!! I truly loved from word one to the last one. (c :)
Thanks so much Paul xoox
Tracey

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 28, 2005

An extraordinary journey through the life of a powerful creative moment brutalized by the less sensitive among us. These are finely nuanced lines that capture the very essence and delicate passion of the creative impulse. Beauty greets the beast with a forgiving heart and a gentle sense of humor:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

Paul, you must be a riot in real life if you can come off this funny and natural on a page.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

You disguise those achingly beautiful lines of longing in between verses about Motorhead. The juxtaposition makes them even more poignant. I laughed nevertheless. I'm glad that we can laugh through the pain...xox

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

Hee, hee, glad I'm not the only nose picker..
Music is ok, but it can get me off track..
Love the humor....

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

I grinned from beginning and almost to end, then I chuckled. I loved it, Paul. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

Thank you for sharing your humorous side. It is therapeutic for many, Paul. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

i loved this...absolutely loved it...i was getting a bit tired of romantic and this just grabbed me and said 'how about this'

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

LOL, Paul...I hate it when my inspiration leaves before the poem is finished. I call it "clarity that fades to indifference." You have written the moment well.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

LOL... Where are you? You can't hide from the finger...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

LOL
Well both actions get results Paul, nose picking and prose writing. Except I think that the later produces a more permenent result, even if the first is a needed temporary fix. But either way something inside.....comes out....and when we got the blues.....
they need an outlet...
Enjoyed this tons!

LOL thank you for the unexpected smile, I am delighted.......pax Anita

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Paul,

LOL--poetus interruptus! LOVE IT

Clever, creative you--fantastic write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Paul,

Poetic excellence is clearly defined in this outstanding write ... superb!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

next time try listening to Eastern Awakening's "Buddha Chillout" may give you some food for thought besides those boggers ;)

cool humor at its best ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Be sure to use your pinky finger, it gets further in to the thicker boogers...they have more taste and more meat...Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

LOL!!!I always write with music, but I turn it off if it doesn't suit the mood of the poem;-) This is a fantastic write so be thankful to Motorhead, and please no picking your nose;-)!Love the humor!

eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Nah... I just laughed myself soxless at this, Paul... this has got to be Brithumour!! Ah yes!! The poetic sublime torpedoed by some heavy metal, or, in my case, belting Matchbox 20 (bit more intelligent and refined, but STILL belting at times!! - don't hit me!!) Bet you play pretty mean air-guitar, huh?! Yeah, let's forget all this poetry lark and just meet up for a bit of thrash... :)) LOL Kate aka Kuatro (Susie)(showing me age...) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Lol...I found I MUST have silence to write...otherwise who knows what would come out...although some may think it's better than my usual anyway...lol

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Hey you may pick your nose...but...hmmmm....maybe meditation will give that head a good "backup" start!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Wow this is defiantely not your every day hum drum write. Well done.
Felix

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Prose/nose.....as long as you keep writing and trying....smile. Henry

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Dear Paul,
Even when motorhead interrupts your thoughts, you produce art. This is abstract but it is powerful nevertheless. The words 'like a candle, I watch you melt away' went deep. I find them achingly sad. In my heart I'd like to believe that nobody you love ever truly fades away but remains within, an everlasting light.
I wish I could contribute something more meaningful but for once I am at a loss for words...
Love Chanti