The life of a soldier is cheaper
than the bullet killing him.
The boots make a sucking noise when
being pull from the mud as the soldier walks,
the air is fouled by rotten human flesh
in a no man’s land where all flowers don’t
give that blotches of colors calling life
as told to be by the one most almighty God.
The boots make a sucking noise, like
the ones on mother’s breast by hungry boys,
but here it is only barbed wire on to fell
in a no man’s land where all men will sob,
because tears are cheaper than the bullets
that are killing the creatures made by God.
The boots make a sucking noise, the rain
will pour over the soldiers soul and not stop,
adding to the misery of long nights lookout
in a no man’s land of others men’s wars,
eternity is measured in short witches hours
the waiting time is always decided by God.
The boots don’t make a sucking noise, the
soldier’s isn’t walking on the mud anymore,
he will be perhaps a decorated War Veteran
in that no man’s land they are calling “home,”
a wounded soldier wouldn’t be that lucky,
if on the insanity over there, he was to be told,
“back home will be the start of your eternity…”
by his “countrymen”…but not by God.
Dear Georg, what you wrote here, is a real poet's description. I remember those days when not only the boots made a sucking noise, but also when the body was wet to the bone and we kept going, and sometimes helping our fellow comrads to carry their guns and their belongings. Yes, you brought to memory what seemed as an eternity.
Well done, my friend, Love Emile
A powerful and profound write Brother
Great piece
Bless our men at the fronts
May the lord bring them and their families
The comfort of peace they deserve
A hero dies once,
The coward avoids death,
to avoid death another day.....
Peace be with you
I know your descriptions of the battlefield were written from your own experiences. It is a stark reality that keeps a warrior on a very strange edge emotionally and mentally. The picture is effective.
Blessings ...
....wow I feel weighted as I read this...my thoughts and prayers reach out to our service men and woman...may they get what they soooo deserve...which can never be too much!
Christine
THIS PIECE IS DONE WELL AND FILLED WITH TRUTH...SADLY. OUR BOYS CERTAINLY DO NOT GET ALL THE SERVICES OR CARE THEY SO RICHLY DESERVE AT HOME, AFTER ALL THEY'VE GONE THROUGH 'OVER THERE'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Hi Georg, What more can one say after reading this? The truths, the profundity and the redundancy of it all, you portray here... your words are worth more than any picture... thank you for sharing...
I think for once they should send the politicians over to fight
Pull all soldiers off the lines on both sides and just let the Politicians fight it out
Great write as always Georg
Have a good day
The Buzzard
Georg, you speak of so many unspoken truths. The peril of many wars and the peril of returning home, hopefully alive, but you already know how that goes. Sad to realize how much live has been devalued. I still say God please bless our troops and keep them safe...
What a shame that wars must be fought by mostly the innocent.
What a shame that forever in the past and forever in the future combat boots will forever be making sucking sounds through the mud of a hundred different battlefields. What a way, Georg, you have of putting your words in a place where we can see ourselves. Great poem.
Your friend, Mark
And the heart weeps, the mind reels, and God watches, when will we learn when? Your footprints leave a sucking sound in my heart Georg, I could feel you there, because you still are, aren't you?
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Words fail - sad to be a Veteran, especially when the country that asked you to fight for, volunteered to fight for, turns its back ... you know how I feel. Semper Fi, Marine, and welcome home, soldier. Welcome home. Best I can do, since the government won't - if I had my way, NO Veteran would lack for anything.
Alone...I have never experienced alone per say as the gamut of quietuses which lives within the lines of this emotive poem’s deeply feeling expression & no doubt you know these sounds of mud Georg...but I hope your eternity was/is not like this poem, your heart so beautiful..and also so very brave...I hope you are not alone with your wisdoms...
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
You took us into the not only the minds and hearts of these brave men but for a few brief seconds into their actual bodies as well. I could smell the stench, feel the suction on my feet and also sadest of all I could feel the sense that my country had deserted me...
Georg, very profound and real. I pray for all men in the service of our country.
Thank you for sharing such a poignant poem.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
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Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Oh my..these words made tears roll down my face sweet man..I have a family member over in AFGHANISTAN right now ...over there and he is only 22 its crazy over there I am so afraid for him and all the other soldiers over there..sighh...as always Excellent writing..please have a wonderful and safe day OK..Hugsss
the misery of long nights lookout,
in a no man’s land of others men’s wars
Quite profound, brother. Politicians start our wars, and valiant soldiers fight them. Yet, when these valiant soldiers return home, far too often, these very same politicians seem to forget that they even exist.
And then there are those wars that when we returned we got spit upon & called an assortment of vile slurs...when we were better off in monsoonal rain storms or heat & humidity that your uniforms never did dry...better to be "in country" than home where we belong, supposedly...E &
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Well done, my friend, Love Emile
Regis
Great piece
Bless our men at the fronts
May the lord bring them and their families
The comfort of peace they deserve
A hero dies once,
The coward avoids death,
to avoid death another day.....
Peace be with you
William
Blessings ...
Christine
In Spirit,
Bear
Pull all soldiers off the lines on both sides and just let the Politicians fight it out
Great write as always Georg
Have a good day
The Buzzard
Cynthia
Be always safe,
Karen
What a shame that forever in the past and forever in the future combat boots will forever be making sucking sounds through the mud of a hundred different battlefields. What a way, Georg, you have of putting your words in a place where we can see ourselves. Great poem.
Your friend, Mark
~W~
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
We must remember our soldiers, and what they endure. You have written this so well, it tugs at the heart.
Mary
Words fail - sad to be a Veteran, especially when the country that asked you to fight for, volunteered to fight for, turns its back ... you know how I feel. Semper Fi, Marine, and welcome home, soldier. Welcome home. Best I can do, since the government won't - if I had my way, NO Veteran would lack for anything.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
Fee
Thank you for sharing such a poignant poem.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
in a no man’s land of others men’s wars
Quite profound, brother. Politicians start our wars, and valiant soldiers fight them. Yet, when these valiant soldiers return home, far too often, these very same politicians seem to forget that they even exist.