Love's Carrousel (haiku) (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on December 3, 2009

POIGNANT DESCRIPTION OF...LOVE LOST. BLESSINGS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on December 2, 2009

That's a Dutch for ya! LOL! Wow! So glad I stopped in for this power-driven Ku! Now dust yourself off and go back for more! She likes that! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

I'm with Jasmin! Do I smell smoke? Patrick

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

Crunch can be good if the essence of loving is milled over and sifted and baked into a sweet confection because of its fine texture. Beautiful pen Georg.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

whichever language you express these powerful thoughts in, Georg, they grind to an almost alchemical potency in both strength and meaning. I love the mutuality of the process, the co-dependency of it. The spirit behind your words is the fermenting yeast which makes the leaven rise. We can all taste how good this writing is. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 1, 2009

Sad George but reality kicks in.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ankin Timourian

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Georg, I am not an expert in love, but love can be as solid as rock or it can become a sand, like you said if it is one way love...
Great thought, but very sad always when discovered that love was only an illusion...
Love and hugs, Ankin

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Sad, yes...but written so beautifully.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

perhaps that happens in love but we will still follow our hearts blind advice once smitten...for what is live without the pursuit of love?
fee

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Sad and powerful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

ouch...what a tale you spun Georg..this is truly amazing!

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust, Love's a bust, you'll have to adjust, have you not enjoyed the grind though dear brother, while all this on your mind?
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

rather sad but beautifully done

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Beautiful.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

GEORG MATEOS!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAY GOD LOVE YOU, AS MUCH I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

So she's smart enough to separate your dreams from reality.

Most lovers know there lover better than they know themselves.

Food for thought at the breakfast table.

Doug

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Georg - Everyone, I think, has experienced the message of the image you have created in these short lines.

"mill’s powder…your dreams." - Excellent

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

OH! The Grind…the crunch….the churned
and my heart in stillness ponders
the mills remains can be gathered for a different dream
a better love built with tender thoughts & care
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

that's an errie nightmarish prowler photo...grrrr.....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Love sadly does fall through our fingers, if we let it. And what a graphic!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

Georg,

How many languages do you speak?!? WOW. No matter: beautiful, in any language. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 30, 2009

I like it! PERFECT in any language! Well done; bravo, Georg! *clapping*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D