Oblivious love (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 3, 2010

I believe Cupid needs to go visit the eye doctor! He should never miss not for no one, no how!!

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 2, 2010

Enjoyed the smiles Georg, well done!

Carole~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 2, 2010

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Taking pictures of naked little boys is very illegal, especially those with wings...;-) e

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Cupid shot his arrow straight into my arse, which sent me running toward a burning lake, which is where I fell in love with a fallen angel. Chaos theory. It's really true.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Nicely done...

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

HAHAHA, Yup Cupid is stupid. kewl fun write.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

SORRY, GEORG, I CANNOT AGREE BECAUSE...ANGELS/CUPIDS SENT BY GOD TO PERFORM A MISSION...MAY BE DELAYED BY NEGATIVE FORCES, BUT THEY 'NEVER' MISS/FAIL AT A TASK...IT JUST DOESN'T HAPPEN BUT...IT MAKES MARVELOUS WRITING WITH GREAT IMAGERY. ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING...GOD BLESS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

..gosh not right to miss an aim at love~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

What a write, Georg E!!! Heeeheee!!! Well...Sorry to say this...Yes, sometimes the blindfolded cupid does shoot his arrows at many, and thus missing the target.

Love this write!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

where they laughing at the question
or the nudity?
...seriously I adore your 2nd line!
I myself am very comfortable
with these naked dreams is probably why
I even roller blade in them -shhhhhhh

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Excellent write, Georg; well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Well Georg they say love is blind, Time to remove that blindfold and go after what you want.

Your Newfie friend,Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

A shot in the dark so to speak ha, Happy Easter! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Pointedly accurate

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Georg,

Sometimes old Cupid don't aim right! Great right.

Mary

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Well old buddy I would say it's time to break out the thirty/thirty and start shooting back at that little bugger but without the blindfold...bet he'd get his little butt in action scooting out of there.
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Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Excellent! This explains so much! Rebecca

Reviewed by larry linville

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

How well this explains so many people. In nakedness, laughter can be devastating.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

nicely done!