In cadenced fury
Tremendous swells
Ravaged the shoreline.
Roosted atop jagged cliffs
A weathered cottage creaked
In quicksilver winds.
Even the fearless
Would be foolish
To venture out on
A night that clawed
At the senses as darkly as this ……
A sudden punctuated
Knocking rattled the wooden door.
Jolted from dreams, my tired bleary eyes
Focused on a twisted human face squinting
Through the window; his wet cloak clung to him;
The pounding became frenzied.
“What do you want?” I blurted in affected tenor
“Sanctuary,” a darkened voice growled
In that instant
My life flashed in
Brief sketches before my eyes;
A kaleidoscope of grainy grays and
Superable images washed through me;
Something was amiss, terribly amiss
As sharpened steel this sinister
Sound had somehow sliced through the
Aging gristle of sedentary ramparts, and then,
To worsen matters, a sense of inadequacy was devouring
Me now in great gulps; I felt vulnerable, condemned, doomed.
Again the perfervid knocking jarred my nerves.
“A moment please,” I cried out, nervously
Fumbling for my slippers
Outside, as vivid white lightening
Etched the atmosphere in hot traceries,
Thunder exploded like cannonade in battle.
Clammy voices were murmuring (in my brain)
Doleful elegies to one banished now to the far
Doldrums of Horse Latitudes
In that small window the
Waning fire was casting eerie
Shadows on a weatherworn face; his
Stringy hair danced wet in blustering wind
Again the door shook and
Old hinges groaned in protest.
“What do you want?” I cried out despairingly.
“SANCTUARY” The voice roared maniacally.
“There is no room and I am not alone,” was my courageous reply,
“I am armed fiend, so be gone, and take your accursed turmoil with you!”
Cursing me bitterly, the figure turned and vanished into the darkness.
Soon thereafter the fierceness of all I had imagined lessened.
richard lloyd cederberg
3/2010
A Monumental Journey Novels
truly exceptional piece, richard.
be well,
carolyn
"the figure turned and vanished into the darkness"
I don't want it in little Kansas! I just locked my door.
xo
This is a fascinating piece. I'd like to see you embrace this style more often, because it's the perfect vehicle for your vivid word choices. I think with all the world tragedy and odd weather, I've been thinking end of world scenarios. Perhaps that's why this story of yours reminds me end-of-days. There's supposed to be a time when we'll need to husband resources and not go outside and not answer the door. It's that moment specifically I 'see' in your poem. For the person at the door looks like our 'sister', but she's probably not what she seems. Opening the door, even to a trusted person, could spell disaster. The Scorpio in me wants to see more in this, too. I can't help but wonder if the teller/dreamer is struggling with the decision to trust someone close - with a secret, money, feelings.... Excellent writing. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
There was a knock upon my door while reading this and I JUMPED.
Wow! Richard Cederberg...you have a winner!!!
Namaste,
Susan
On the philosophical side of storytelling, sharing one of your nightmares with your peers which such literary purity let only place for one word..."kudos!"
Georg
But. This is very poesque. It does have the feel of powerful novel.
Ron
And Russell's artwork is mightily impressive, too.
In admiration,
John
ET
with graphic imagines only a dream could produce. Virtually what I would describe as Apocalyptic. As to the context of the poem, It was quite disturbing. Your preciseness to detail astonished me.
Doug