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· A NEW RACE OF HuMANS

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· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

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your pure white sands...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

For Michele Elizabeth. Celebrating 14 years of marriage.

Sunday, September 7, 2014


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Recently I discovered an old novel, ‘Nightmare Abbey’’, written in 1818, by Thomas Love Peacock. To say that I was captivated with this intelligently conceived gothic topical satire would be an understatement. This quote, taken from its musty, yellowed, paper-mite nibbled pages, became a creative springboard: “There are, for the most part, some learned casuists, who maintain that love has no language, and that all the misunderstandings and dissentions of those in love arise from the fatal habit of employing words on a subject to which words are inapplicable.” I have to disagree Mr. Peacock. Applicable words for my better half…
______________________________________


Resolving to avoid every
fine-spun nuance of human
pretense; I spoke with the winds
today and asked that the miracle I
had discovered in you - such torrid
brush strokes dividing the light and the
dreary - remain the hot-ember now
burning brightly in me

Extending its
warmth and light as
aliment and inspiration;
wisdom encouraged me to
avoid the vast discolorations of
thoughtless indiscretion and
hinted that I embrace you
in high regard
without

CRUSHING
the delicate flower
guarding your heart from
marauders, and from the crisp
edges of chasms, and the
tainted breath of
firedrakes,
and the
twisted hands
of wanton potters
desirous of enslaving
the assailable parts of you
while devouring your essence
as pit-roasted meat…

Save the rage
of moment’s fierceness;
I pleaded earnestly for the chance
to understand your depths,
to encourage YOU,
to love YOU,
more
effectively,
without stumbling
through your pure white sands
and leaving marks that might
remain as scars…
        Between the Cracks



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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 31, 2016

well done !!

may 2017 be the best yet for you and your family

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on October 8, 2014
A great Anniversary write, and to express your thoughts to her like this is immensely satisfaction in a marriage.

Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on September 18, 2014
Oh my goodness this was so moving Richard! I felt your words as blood to my soul...

Totally Moved!
Teresa

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on September 13, 2014
Richard & Michelle,
Happy Anniversary to you both. This loving write is pure
of heart.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 9, 2014
an excellent write Richard
most enjoyable reading
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 8, 2014
Happy Anniversary to Michele Elizabeth, she is lucky to have you there to write such a nicely put,relatively so, present to her...(PS: I re-sent my address again via messages and I don't understand the reason mail would not find me as yes I did move in the Middle of May to this my new address but all and I repeat ALL my bills have followed me quite well to this address...ain't that always the way...?) -e-

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 8, 2014
ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!...'I spoke with the winds today'---------- EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 8, 2014
Yes, very romantic and highly descriptive. Since she knows you so well, she will understand it and love it far more than any other reader. A couple of phrases like, "as pit roasted meat…," throw me a bit, but again, she will more likely understand your intent then I.

Still, I find describing the indescribable like love, extremely difficult with the pitfalls it brings.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 8, 2014
I had an experience similar to Odin's. Mine was closer to awe at your ability to put into words a depth of feeling many of us have but only the very few are able to convey with the romantic punch of Khayyam or Shakespeare. Superb!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 7, 2014
Hauntingly romantic, a poem that takes me to another place and time.

Well done Richard!

John Michael

Reviewed by Lynette Bat-Abba
Reviewed on September 7, 2014
Awwwwesome as ever, Richard! Your other-half is blessed to be loved by such a tender heart.
Blessings!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2014
a delicate sojourn whose purpose is to prevent unnecessary intervention

Reviewed on September 7, 2014
Happy anniversary! And many many more. Lovely work.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 7, 2014
"I pleaded earnestly for the chance
to understand your depths,
to encourage YOU,
to love YOU,
more
effectively,
without stumbling
through your pure white sands
and leaving marks that might
remain as scars… "

Now that is something every woman would like to hear. Congratulations to you and your wife, Richard. Intriguing physical shape of the poem there, too.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 7, 2014
I found myself reading this without taking a breath, picturing a desperation in the poet to speak the words before something might prevent the sharing. Don't know why that happened, but it was a hell of a euphoric experience. Loved this exploration.


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