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· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

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together they persevered...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

“It is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation.” Herman Melville.
A tribute in syllable formats 5-7-5-7-7

Saturday, March 12, 2016


Poem Artwork
Although I clamber
To find rare gems still hidden
I remain centered
Recalling my ancestors
And the greatness they achieved
.
With no assurance
Brave men pressed into the void
(Dreaming together)
Knowing that much would be gained
In far-flung explorations
.
Hark those forerunners
Of ocean exploration,
Vasco Da Gama,
Bartolomeu Diaz, and
Sir Ferdinand Magellan
.
Traversing oceans
On dark forbidding waters-
Fearlessly hopeful-
These adventurers sailed off
To discover the unknown
.
Beyond what they knew
They journeyed forth together,
Sturdy as storms raged,
Each seeking to understand
As their dreams were buffeted
.
A fierce wind picks up
From a far distant silence
All hearts now aware
Listening for the first drops
The storm begins in earnest
.
As if the lightening
Across a chill sky could chase
Parrots from the spar,
Cold wind hammers the foc’sle
With stark indifference
.
Bearing obstacles,
With cruel deprivation,
Many lost their lives,
Persevering together
Seeking goals they saw beyond
.
In a dead man’s hand,
A final rain-soaked letter
Crumpled in a ball,
Fierce winds howl through wooden masts
Cormorants struggle above
.
Knowing life and death
As two sides of the same coin,
Each held destiny
As a personal calling
Without any wavering
.
Working together
In spirit-felt unity,
Their faith became seeds
With which the furrows were sown
In prevision of harvest
.
richard lloyd cederberg
3/2016
.
“Hark now hear the sailors cry, smell the sea and feel the sky, let your soul and spirit fly, into the mystic…” Van Morrison.

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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 23, 2016
MAY THE HAND OF GOD THAT PLACED THE GIFTS OF EVERY JOURNEY'S CALLING WITHIN, CONTINUE TO LEAD, GUIDE AND DIRECT AS WE PERSEVERE...TOGETHER. WELL DONE, RICHARD, A FINE TRIBUTE TO EVERY CALLING AND THE CALLED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 18, 2016
If I recall your ancestry correctly, the Vikings were consummate explorers as well as the fiercest warriors in battle. Your poem honors those who set out on long voyages without the benefit of knowing the weather into hurricanes and rogue waves, along with the constant danger of running aground or running out of food and water before they found land to re-provision.

They were certainly brave, if not foolhardy. Many a woman awaited return of her man from the sea and many did not.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 14, 2016
Very nice piece of wordsmithing. Much to enjoy and ponder. Thank you

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on March 14, 2016
Melville would be proud!
Dan

Reviewed on March 13, 2016
Well done, the ocean is not to be taken lightly. It demands respect. The format chosen does too.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 13, 2016

well done


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
Still belting them out, I see...long winded as ever are you...also glad to see you back from your recent down period...hope you found peace during that time...-e-

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
Bearing obstacles,
With cruel deprivation,
Many lost their lives,
Persevering together
Seeking goals they saw beyond!

Magnificent!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
excellent write, kudos

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
Richard~
Exceptional! Their faith became seeds.
Enjoyed!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on March 12, 2016
“It is better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation.” --Herman Melville.
"To succeed in imitation one has to be doubly original." --Alex Goldstein.
Only your venerable ancestors know the true reasons of all those people striven in the far-flung ocean. . . Cheers, alex

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
Brilliantly and painstakingly written in both style and content, yet
not a bit of your message was sacrificed. I applaud your work and marvel at your talent.

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
Bravely written. Let us now harvest that vast crop of plastic and dead zones that are the unintended legacy of their courage ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 12, 2016
I really liked this, Richard, you did well by it, but I doubt I will forgo my favorite 5-7-5 count.


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