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Freewill (a universal paradox)

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Portrayal 4 - You are free to choose. But you are not free from the consequence of your choices.
To a wayward sister, DEC…

Thursday, September 6, 2018


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A wise man (who
Uses discretion) will never
Administrate another’s freewill,
Or wag a finger when another’s
Unwiseness creates harmful context;
Nor will he judge when another’s desire for
Wholeness is overshadowed by an
Inability to achieve it…
.
An observing man
Sees in diverse others what he
Never (by choice) became......the
Foolish obsession some have to stride
The meridian where light casts shadows
On an artfully sculpted religious prison…
.
NOT NOW – NOT EVER
Will he mention the crooked paths
Haughtiness prescribes, or those bitterly
Wayward things some adorn their lives with…
.
You should know,
In all honesty,
It’s what I see in many
At first – what I don’t like – so
I am flawed, too, by my choices,
Just like you, and at times cannot maneuver
Beyond my prideful self-interest to deal with
All the discontentment still festering in me
About my seasons of madness …
.
I’ll admit,
From experience,
That making bad choices can force
Anyone into a time of isolation, and that
Harboring the wounds can be like a wet cloak,
(heavy and smothering) but that these failings do not
Represent who we are, they only remind us that some of
What remains in us is fallow and incomplete…
.
Now… pick yourself up,
Get clean, and start again…
.
richard lloyd cederberg
2018

The Portrayal Series: Poetiprose insights concerning my family and friends. They will also address some of the actors, artists, musicians, and writers I worked with in college, or professionally, in my 20’s 30’s and 40’s. All of these individuals were influential in shaping the man I’ve become.
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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
THIS SHARING RINGS SO TRUE FOR WE ARE ALL SHAPED AND MOLDED BY THE CHOICES THAT WE MAKE IN LIFE. THANK GOD FOR HIS MERCY AND GRACE AND FOR THE COMPASSION THAT FILLS THOSE TO LEND A HELPING HAND TO THOSE WHO 'REACH' FOR ASSISTANCE. LOOKING BACK OVER MY LIFE, I REALIZE THAT, INDEED...'ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD TO THEM THAT LOVE GOD AND ARE CALLED ACCORDING TO HIS PURPOSE'... WE SERVE A GOD WHO IS NO RESPECTER OF PERSONS AND THOSE WHOM 'HE' HAS STRENGTHENED REACH BACK, IN THEIR OWN WAY, AND HELP THOSE WHO ARE YET WEAK AS WE 'ALL' PRESS-ON. THANKS FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 16, 2018
Bad choices that create isolation, this idea made me stop and read the stanza from the beginning. I was wondering if it is always possible to label a choice as a good or a bad choice. In some cases it is... We are chained to the consequences of our actions, so I welcome the wisdom that prevents us from being judgmental and work on it. Lots of thoughts in my mind provoked by your writing and that's something valuable. Thank you.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 8, 2018
A very introspective and insightful poem, highlighting the man behind the words. Certainly in the art and artist world the idea of free will can be carried way too far. Just today, I noted another artist posted in the news who died at 26. I don't even know what he did… Both to end his life and what he did in life that made him the object of others' observation (fans).

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 6, 2018
Those paradoxes have a way of haunting us, especially free will that has confounded societies down thru the ages. You have presented here an interesting take on the subject. Choices indeed, they are the bane of our lives with their unforeseen consequences.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 6, 2018
I do believe you have had some excellent nurturing over these many years. This nurturing shows up in your work here on AD, and I feel you are a profound, upright person.

Reviewed on September 6, 2018
"I’ll admit,
From experience,
That making bad choices can force
Anyone into a time of isolation, and that
Harboring the wounds can be like a wet cloak,
(heavy and smothering) but that these failings do not
Represent who we are, they only remind us that some of
What remains in us is fallow and incomplete… " -

Such wise words! When everyone was born, we were not handed down a manual in life to let us know what to do. Sometimes we make mistakes by choosing the wrong choice, but that does not define who we are. Lessons are learned, and life continues to a better self.

Sandie


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