We either trap ourselves--our own worst enemies--or by circumstance beyond our control. The metaphor is great here. And the rhythm of this write rocks the meaning. Like an Elvis shake--you know that almost epileptic fit? Been gone awhile Ron and I can't remember--are you a musician? This is the write of someone with a musical bone. Definately captures the restlessness of one behind bars--literal or emotional.
a fine allegory and a masterful song writing job to boot Ron -- Alcatraz, as symbolic of icy cold desolation as exists -- peace and love -- Jon Michael
You write the strangest "Blues tunes" - your a frustrated bluesman for sure. I wouldn't want to swim that bay - a cold death for sure. Be a great tune to a historical re-make movie of some sort...
Later, mike
Lockup is no party, though I doubt that it was ever intended to be. This could surely be a rockin' song, one that might get the inmates dancing. Nice write, Ron.
Take care,
Sherry
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Later, mike
Take care,
Sherry