Time is a river and try as we might the upstream effort has its price. It also has its rewards. Go with the flow is a common mantra, it too has its price and rewards. Only an anchor can prevent the journey. It has a price too, but little reward. Patrick
Ron, the flow of this rendering is marvelous, free. The rhyme is purposeful not imposed. The message is mellow and yet binding to us each and every one my friend. Now row, time is what we must not waste. Rhyme will have to take its chances as the river of time advances. May you be overwhelmed with joy peace and love. Jon Michael
Thats quite a story to this poem. The only rowing I ever did was in Central Park in NYC. It was nothing like you described. This piece was good a little different for you perhaps. But very good, and a top notch rhyme too.
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Anna
This makes me want to pick up an ore
And head for another shore.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY